Date: 01/09/14 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
So great to see an update Julie!
I knew Gianna wouldn't be able to just keep ignoring that facts and I'm glad she made that call, even though Nick isn't in the river.
I watched an interesting TV show about Amish teens going off to do what they wanted before deciding whether to stay Amish. It's a good idea to let them sample both lives before making a choice, rather than being forced. That after party was a lot more interesting than the sing, lol.
I actually felt sorry for Jane, it is every parent's nightmare :(
Great chapter and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Steph! The Amish stuff is interesting, although I have to admit I've gotten bored writing about it. It's an interesting lifestyle though. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks again for reading and leaving feedback! :)
Date: 01/08/14 08:15 am Title: Chapter 15
I love that you are starting to work on this one again. It makes me happy to see a new chapter because I love this story so much.
I like that Nick is starting to fit in, but I have a feeling that sooner or later he won't be safe there or that someone will find out the truth. I am also curious about Kevin....hope for a new chapter soon.
P.S. I love that you put in so much info about the Amish customs and stuff....cause I was curious about the beard thing myself!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Tracy! I'm trying to put my Amish research to good use LOL. The rest of the boys, including Kevin, will be in the next chapter.
Date: 01/08/14 12:47 am Title: Chapter 15
Julie! I'm so happy to see this update!! Very good chapter and way to leave us waiting with this cliffhanger...love the bonfire scene with the secret beer & sodas and of course Nick's talent lol.
Gina is starting to get suspicious and making the anonymous phone call....curious to see what they find when they check the river.
Please update ASAP!!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for being my 100th review! :) To be honest, this chapter was written back in the summer, and I've been hanging onto it for a long time. I have one more ready to post soon, but it's been awhile since I've actually worked on this story. I just wanted to get the chapters up finally! I'm glad you enjoyed this one, and thanks so much for taking the time to review! I will update it again soon.
