What a roller coaster of emotions in this chapter! I'm thankful that you didn't have Kevin miraculously start speaking (I know you wouldn't do that lol).

I can feel the grief in their hearts with how Kevin is doing and the anguish when Jane told the about the police diving for a body. I love how you write Jane in stories with her dramatic voice playing the ' victim' much to the chagrin of the guys lol.

This story has kept my interest (as all of your stories have). I can't wait to see what happens.....

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Carrie! I am trying to take my time with Kevin's condition and write it realistically. It's a challenge, but I've actually been inspired by various stories you have written that put the boys in similar situations, with some kind of brain damage. You usually had them recover in the end, but you always made it seem like a long, drawn out process, as it would be in real life. And of course, Jane is always fun to write in small doses. I'm glad you're enjoying this one - thanks again for the feedback!