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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/12 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 16

ah Max thinks his daddy is dead! Witness protection? something more sinister? ooooh.. why the fake names.



Author's Response:

Aww lol you'll see soon enough! Thanks for reading, Lore! 

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 16

From before: I did see that interview and I loved what Nick said about his condition, and I actually admit that I teared up a little bit when Nick told the Kevin story, and that you could tell it meant so much to Nick. So I'll be looking forward to that one no matter how long it is. lol

As for this Chapter, it was great how you made everything unfold, between the dreams and the revelation of Max being Nick's Uncle, I really liked how you did that. I can't wait to see how that is going to change the dynamic between the two.

Author's Response: Thanks Sam :O) I'm glad you liked the way I revealed all of that stuff. I'm always worried about things like that and yes, I almost teared up too for that part of the interview. That and when Howie was talking about his dad. I hope I get a chance to write on it soon. LOL I haven't been able to because i've been busy.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 16

I really liked this chapter. This story is like an onion and I anxiously await each layer.

Also, I laughed like the 12 year old I am when reading your authors note because it says "get it up" lol Just wanted you to know :)

Author's Response: LMAO I could just say I out it there just for you! :OP Thanks for the onion analogy and the review!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 07:21 am Title: Chapter 16

Really enjoyed that chapter. I didn't think Max had killed her, but you had me guessing and doubting him for a while there!

So Max is his uncle, hmm.

Looking forward to more, as always!

Author's Response: Thanks Steph! :O)

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter 16

Wow I wouldn't never have thought that Max was Nick's uncle, things are getting good, I hope Nick's dad isn't dead. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 03:10 am Title: Chapter 16

OMG! Ok, thank you so much for updating. I thought we were gonna have to wait until next Monday and I was freaking out a bit. lol. Well, those dreams were extremely disturbing! Really confusing, but dreams always are. Interesting to know that Max is Nick's uncle and LOL at the pig's name being Bob.

This story is so unpredictable! Great stuff :)

Author's Response: Thanks Sel lol yes, I thought i'd be nice and give you guys an early update since it was kind of a mean cliffy. Glad you liked Bob hehe

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 01:58 am Title: Chapter 16

Awesome update!!!!
Wow so Max is his uncle! Damn mare lol you got me so hooked on this! I was happy to see an update! Now I just wish my muse would pay me a visit lol

Author's Response: Yup, he's the crazy uncle! lol Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed the update and I hope your muse comes back soon!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 01:53 am Title: Chapter 16

Wow! The two interwoven dreams were kind of confusing (as dreams usually are LOL), but I'm glad we're starting to get some answers. I thought the same thing about the pig being named Bob too. How horrible, to find out your whole life, right down to your name, has been a lie. I can't wait to find out the real story in full, including Uncle Max's role in it. Great job!

Author's Response: aww thanks Julie! Yeah, I want those dreams to be confusing because I know my dreams are usually confusing and he was also realy young which doesn't help but wait...I have to let you guys know the full story? Dang! :OP Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 16

Oh holly hell Mare lol. What the hell killed Nicole, Jane, and Bob? I mean I knew there was something up, but man. So Max is Nick's uncle. Interesting.

Man just what was Bob doing that caused all this? Can't wait to see the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Hey, who said Bob was dead? LOL the answer...asbestos! :OP Thanks for reading! And yes Max is Nick's uncle. YAY to dysfunctional families!