Date: 02/28/12 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 18
Before I forget I must mention that I love the sarcastic humor that I am finding in this story. The comment about the gay bonding in the last chapter and the comment about bible boy coming with a bookmark and giving Max a papercut, comment in this one, they are just perfect for the tone of this story!
Now on to the chapter. What just happened to Kevin's family. *gasps*
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment, Lore. I have a very sarcastic sense of humor do I tend to carry that through with the guys. Is it sad that I don't remember what happened to Kevin's family? Lol
Date: 09/19/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
This Max is a very interesting character. So, hmmmm. Bob in the CIA? That makes sense, I can't wait to find out what Nick will remember (or if he will). Love the comment about the paper cut from the bookmark. I was cracking up.
And HOLY CLIFFIE!! Damn, can't believe you're gonna make us wait for that one. Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Sel! Like I keep telling everyone, I forgot I ended it with a cliffy lol sorry about that!
Date: 09/19/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh, you did not just end it like that! Curse you and your cliffhangers!! LOL Other than that, it was another great chapter! Glad we're getting a little more info. I like that Nick's dad and Max were good guys and not involved in something shady. Can't wait for the next update to find out what happened and if Bob is dead...
Author's Response: LOL thanks Julie. Yeah, I didn't want to go the bad guy running from the law way. :O)
Date: 09/19/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
No a cliffhanger till next weekend lol, I hope Kevin didn't find out anything to bad, wow Bob in the CIA, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :O) I actually forgot I had a cliffhanger in this chapter lol
Date: 09/19/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
Another cliffhanger *bites nails*
Great chapter though, and I'm beginning to warm to Max, he's not as emotionless as I imagined him to be.
So they were in the CIA, I knew it had to be something like that or the mafia!
Looking forward to the next chapter to see what's going on with Kevin.
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Glad to know you're warming up to Max. I hope everyone else does as well lol :O)
Date: 09/19/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 18
Awwww now what's wrong? That said, wow at all the information in this chapter. CIA? Seriously? Yeesh. But you know Max is hiding something huge, and that there's a big reason why he doesn't want Nick to remember.
I'm happy Nick couldn't go through with his immensely dumb idea. I love the goober but it's like don't be stupid! LOL. I love Nick and Brian and how you portray them, it's just so cute.
Author's Response: Thanks Rose! :O)
Date: 09/19/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 18
OMG.....Nick's dad worked for the CIA. Big surprise. I feel bad for Nick, he wants to connect with his uncle and he wants answers, but Max is holding something more from him, he isn't telling him everything. I was sad that Nick wanted to leave the guys behind, and I wonder what Kevin's phone call was about. Can't wait to see the next chapter, you got me hooked as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, Bob in the CIA lol I do chuckle just thinking about it but stranger things have happened I guess. Thanks for reading :O)
