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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/12 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 20

I wonder if Kevin figured out what was going on and is trying to get in the room? hrm, maybe Max is back early.  Interesting so Jane is alive, does she have something to do with what is going on or did she go into "hiding" after she decided to divorce "Bob"?  or something like that... interesting. Continuing on.



Author's Response:

I love all the guessing. It always makes me smile. I do the same thing when I read or watch anything lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 20

Ooh, this chapter was really suspenseful toward the end! So Jane has really been alive all this time? Weird... Wonder if she's one of the bad guys? I never know with your stories LOL. I loved the banter between AJ and Nick throughout this chapter. Great update! Reading on...

Author's Response: Thanks Julie. I felt the need to give AJ and Nick a little bonding time. I feel like i've neglected poor AJ in this story.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 09:16 am Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad AJ went with him, but wonder what the story is with Jane Carter? Maybe she wanted out of it so they faked her death? Or maybe she was an undercover agent? I wonder if Max is the one at the door, hmm ... Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! :O)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 20

HAHA! Dufoburger!!! Love that you threw that in there! So, Jane is alive and well...interesting. Can't wait to see WHY she is and why Nick is left in the dark. I love this story!

Author's Response: Yeah. Brian has been saying that for years. I have always loved the dufoburger thing. Thanks for the feedback Jen! It's always nice to know who is reading this. :O)

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 20

Holy hell at all the information packed into this chapter. I did NOT expect Jane Carter to still be alive.

But her being evil....that I'm expecting LOL.

Not sure what to say, cause I'm seriously still processing a few things. Random@ Nick being born in Kentucky LOL.

I am NOT a fan of your cliffhangers! Grrrr! So not cool! LOL. :P You better have that chapter finished by next Saturday or you're in big trouble :)

Author's Response: I finished it last night :O) Although i'm sure it will change at least a thousand times before I post it like this one did lol and blame Nick for Jane being alive. He won that battle in the end. Thanks for reading, Rose!