Date: 03/07/12 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 21
oh no where's Kevin? what did you do to him Mare!!!! lol.
Author's Response:
Hehe ;)
Date: 10/17/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 21
I loved the chapter, the story is great i can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 10/16/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 21
I had no idea this was being updated! Damn, I was sitting here thinking what the heck happened to Mare and then Rose wrote a note about one of her stories being updated frequently, but not showing up on the Most Recent page. So I checked your page to see if it was happening to you too, and low and behold, it was.
Man, it makes me wonder how many other stories I love to read are being updated and I don't know about it. That really sucks that the site is doing that. Anyway, I love where this is going and that Jane is still alive, I have a theory about her, but I'm not going to say anything. I was so sure something was going to happen in the hotel, even up in the hallway when they were leaving, but now...hmm. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Thanks Mare!
Author's Response: Yeah, something is going on with the most recent page. You might want to go and make the stories you read favorites. THis way you'll get an email update when they are updated. I am updating this again tonight so we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading! I'll be curious to know if what you think about Jane is what I write about her. LOL
Date: 10/11/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 21
I have finally started reading this and am now all caught up. I really like it so far, it's very interesting and well written. I really enjoy Nick's dreams and how we as the reader get to experience them and be confused right along with Nick. I also really liked when Max showed up when the guys ordered pizza - that part was really good! Also when they were just sitting there eating with him, I could feel the tension. There were also a lot of really funny bits, mostly involving AJ. I liked the part where they performed for the clowns and Nick said that it was probably AJ's vision of hell.. lmao. And awesome that you wrote that bit before the George Lopez thing! I also laughed when they thought Nick was asleep and he suggested they play truth or dare. One thing I always love about your writing are the dramatic bits and then the random funny bit, it just works so well.
Anyway, this is awesome and I can't wait for the next update! I need to know what happened to Kevin! Great story! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm so glad to know you're enjoying the story. Thanks for all the compliments. It means a lot to me. I had an LOL moment when I heard AJ's story about the clowns on George Lopez and I try really hard to blend in comedy especially when a story gets a bit intense at times. Thanks for reading! Another chapter is coming tonight. :O)
Sorry I am responding so late. I never got a notification about your review *kicks site*
Date: 10/10/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 21
First of all, I don't know how anyone could not enjoy this story, it's amazing!!! Maybe it's to do with the recent page problem and people not having it as a favourite.
But anyway, I'm loving it! This chapter was amazing and had me on the edge of my seat. I really thought someone was going to catch Nick and AJ in the bathroom, but glad they didn't. Also liked what you said about the British papers, yes, they would've made a big deal about it like they always do with celebrity stories.
I think whoever was in the room started the fire as a distraction so that he could go and search Max's room more thoroughly. I'm hoping he didn't get the briefcase. As for Kevin, noooooooooooo, please don't let anyone have taken him, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks Steph. I was just having a downer moment lol I was going back andforth whether or not to have Aj and Nick caught. Hey escaped this time around. We'll see if Kevin is that lucky! lol
Date: 10/10/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 21
I'm still reading this story! And I still love it. I've just been busy so I'm reading it a few chapters at a time and nog reviewing each of them. But I love the direction it's taken, but I don't like it so much that they now 'lost' Kevin... I hope he's okay!
Author's Response: You can blame my power going out for Kevin. I had originally written soemthign completely different but I lost it when I lost power. I decided to take my frustrations out on Kevin lol Thanks for sticking with the story! :O)
Date: 10/10/10 02:07 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh shit, where's Kevin?! I had the same bad feeling as Nick the whole rest of the chapter after the fire alarm went off. Definitely doesn't seem like a coincidence. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! I hope you can get a chapter written by next Saturday. I'm still reading; I just fell behind on everyone's stories this week and was waiting for the weekend to catch up. I loved both of the latest chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks Julie. I hope to get it done tool We'll see. I'm going to try to write tomorrow and I do have one page written already so yay to that.
Date: 10/10/10 02:05 am Title: Chapter 21
HOW DID I MISS THIS CHAPTER LAST TiME UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Author's Response: LOL thanks. Hopefully next weekend. :O)
Date: 10/10/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 21
Weird. Your story didn't show up on the Most Recent page :( Anyway, I don't know why you worry about feedback, Mare! You're way harsh on yourself! I mean, what if your readers are flakes like me, where we only review every so often when we find the time? I read three updates of yours at once just because my brain is overloaded with school, but that doesn't mean I'm not reading it! Lighten up on yourself, Mare! This story is excellent, especially now that Kevin is missing and the briefcase is out there somewhere *dun dun dun* Anyway, it was nice seeing AJ and Nick's relationship, and how they all went outside with Nick when he was feeling anxious. IDK what they're going to do now without Kevin, but I'm looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Yeah, my story isn't showing up on most recent. I keep getting weird error messages. I'm not sure what it is about this story. I have never been as hard on myself with any other one for some reason. I just don't have the fanfic writing confidence I used to have I guess? I'm in a weird funk. It's like this story is playing with my mind or something. lol I have no idea. I wish I could explain it. It's stupid, I know lol I need some paxil. I think Nick's anxiety in this story is just rubbing off on me. Hopefully nothing else will. I don't need some psycho setting anything on fire. :OP
Date: 10/10/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 21
Love the direction you're going in! Very interested to see where Kevin went. Hopefully he's ok. Poor Nick having an anxiety attack...you described that very well. Loved the beginning with Nick and Aj in the tub together. Can totally picture that! Lol
Author's Response: Thanks Sel :O)
Date: 10/10/10 01:25 am Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!!! Wow this is getting good! Where did Kevin go? And poor Nicky! I think the fire alarm was deliberate. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/09/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ack! Kevin, where's Kevin? And I agree about the whole "fire" thing, that is WAY too much of a coincidence to have happened by accident.
And no worries, I think the problem is partly the fact its not showing up on the most recent. It does help, having people see it there. But I love it. :) so don't you dare change anything or stop writing! :P
Author's Response: Thanks Rose. I actually completely changed this chapter form what it was supposed to be already. It worked much better this way though. Thanks for reading!
