Date: 03/08/12 12:15 am Title: Chapter 23
was that a trap? was it set to make him go look for Kevin in the dumpster and then someone grabe him? was it really Kevin in the dumpster, or is Kevin somehow involved? so many questions, must continue.
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 10/26/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 23
I hate you, I really do.
Damn the suspense!!! Great chapter though, there's so many things I want to know. lmao
Author's Response: aww lol hate means love. :O) All in good time my dear...all in good time.
Date: 10/24/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 23
Another cliffy! I hope Nick is going to be okay. Still hoping that Kevin is okay! I liked the part when Anne called, it really added more creepyness and suspense to the situation. Poor Brian, feeling bad for lying to her. What else could he do though? I think that Nick was right that it was better than telling her the truth. Great chapter as always, Mare! I'm glad it's finally showing up on the site :)
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Me too! Now if only it would show up as being updated on the most recent page, i'd be a happy camper. LOL Thanks for reading! Glad you liked the phone call to Anne. I was hesitant about including that because it was so late at night. I wasn't sure if it would be realistic.
Date: 10/24/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 23
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OMG, I'm freaking speechless... Mare, you cannot keep doing this to us and Nick ;)
Author's Response: Apparently, I can lol :O)
Date: 10/24/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 23
Holy shit!!! I hope thats not Kevin in the dumpster! And I hope that the guys get to Nick in time.I'm dying to know who that Russian guy is...
Lol at using the bible as a weapon and at Howie makin the sign of the cross. I was cracking up. Once again you leave us with a cliffie. Can't wait to see what'll happen next!
Author's Response: Thanks Sel lol I think i'm probably going to hell with the constant use of the bible as weapon.
Date: 10/24/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 23
Noooooooooooo another cliffy!!! Mare you are cruel to us to leave us with another cliffy :)
Great chapter though. I wonder who this Russian guy is? He must've sent Nick out there to trap him, or maybe it's someone else? I wonder what did happen to Kevin. And Max, where did he vanish to? Hmm...
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I know! I'm going a little crazy with the cliffhangers lol All those questions will be answered shortly! :O) Thanks Steph!!
