Date: 03/08/12 12:42 am Title: Chapter 25
oh dear lord what is going to happen now, Max is coming in as they are trying to leave!!! eeeeek. has anyone ever told you that you are good at thsi suspense stuff.. lol ;p
Author's Response:
Aww lol well I have heard that a time or two. It's always nice to hear again though lol
Date: 11/14/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter 25
OMFG I'm loving this!
Author's Response: Thanks :O)
Date: 11/14/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 25
Wow, how can they know who to trust? I mean, this Max guy can't be that evil, right? Poor Nick (and the other guys), they must just be so confused and lost! Excellent job at capturing Nick's thoughts, Mare!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph. I'm about to post another chapter lol
Date: 11/08/10 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 25
OH MY GOD. Nick's head must be swimming. Max isn't his uncle and wants him dead? They are taking a big risk following Nickolas. Then again, Nuck's instinct is usually right. Hope it works out but with you I know it won't be easy for them! Great chapter, had to love bad ass AJ.
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! I hope you being able to read this means you can access the site again! :O)
Date: 11/08/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Argh, I still don't know who to trust! They both seem so convincing don't they? Why would Max have kept him alive if he really was the bad guy? But then who is Nickolas really?
I have a feeling things might get worse for the boys :(
Great chapter Mare!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Steph! I'm glad everyone is having a hard time knowing who to trust. :O)
Date: 11/08/10 06:28 am Title: Chapter 25
Wow, this suspense is killing me. I'm going back and forth about who we should believe. Can't wait to see if they made the right decision or not. And loved the part with AJ and the gun. I can picture a young, scrawny AJ looking goofy. And then I picture him in his NG days (a la Incomplete) with a gun and it's kind of sexy...anyway, I digress. LOL.
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: LOL I had the scrawny AJ in mind when writing this. Thanks Sel! :O)
Date: 11/08/10 02:27 am Title: Chapter 25
Geeze Mare! I just hope the Boys aren't making a huge mistake.
And picturing AJ with a gun made me laugh lmao, not sure why.
Author's Response: Yeah, that visual was pretty funny for me too. Thanks Rose
Date: 11/07/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 25
Wow!!! I so don't know what to think or who to believe!! I think they're making a mistake going with this Nickolas, but who knows... I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out! Great chapter, Mare!!
Author's Response: Glad to hear that! Thanks Julie and yay I am finally able to respond to this ! lol
