Date: 03/08/12 12:50 am Title: Chapter 26
what the heck is Nickolas doing? who is good and who is not? you have me guessing Mare and that is saying a lot I typically figure things out in stories
Author's Response:
Yay! Glad you haven't figured it all out!
Date: 11/29/10 03:14 am Title: Chapter 26
I still don't know if I can trust this Nickolas dude, he still feels kind of shady to me. All the christmas lights and music in this chapter just made it feel very eerie. I hope the other guys are able to catch up to Nick! Really good chapter, Mare! Very suspenseful as always :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought the Christmas carols added a nice creepy feel to things lol thanks Stpeh!
Date: 11/18/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter 26
OMG you have got to be kidding me! My money was on Nickolas so he better be the good guy here missy! Maybe he's trying not to involve the rest of the guys, maybe it's slowing them down? (is hopeful). but leaving them with Max is not a good move either. Hmmm...can we please have your story be trained to follow your ideas and not go their merry way too often because you're giving us more cliffies lady! (ok so that's a good thing but sometimes, like today, it's NOT, curious mind wants to know!).
Author's Response: aww, it's so weird seeing you post on here lol I have some more to send to you but i'm not done with the next chapter and I wish that this story would let me decided what to do. The characters have been very renegade! :OP Thanks for the review lol
Date: 11/15/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 26
What the..... I.. I.. I just don't know what to say.. gosh.. I hope everyone will be okay.. and reunited soon too!
Author's Response: Thanks lol glad I left you speechless :OP
Date: 11/15/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 26
Whoops I have been a bad girl. I forgot to review...omg he took Nick!!!! The guys must be freaking out! I knew something was off when Nickolas was pushy about them running and getting out in a hurry. Now he has Nick separated from the others, I wonder what will happen next! I had to lol at CVS because my mom works in one. The subway smells as well, because I'm from Jersey and the many times I have been to NYC there is always a weird smell. Awesome chapter! Oh and I love the speaking in pig Latin thing, how Howie starts with the Spanish when he is mad. I also liked how they kept stopping to help each other. Ok I'm done rambling now lol. Loved the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading Tracy! Yep, gotta love the funky smells of NY and just CVS in general. It's one of my happy places!
Date: 11/14/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 26
I have no words. That cliffy was just cruel LOL. You better finish that next chapter! LOL.
Okay so maybe I have a few words :P
I love the blend of humor and suspense in this. Even as you have Nick running for his life, you still manage to make me laugh lol. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Rose, I would like to think that if Nick was in a life and death situation, he'd be internally babbling to himself. LOL I know it was amean cliffy. I almost kept this chapter going past that point but if I did it would have been marathon long and you knows I likes me cliffies! Thanks for reading and I hope you feel better!
Date: 11/14/10 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
Mean cliffy Mare!! But I loved that chapter. I still don't know whether to trust Nickolas and after that stunt he just pulled, I know why I don't fully trust him.
I loved how Howie helped Nick, even in the face of danger he wasn't going to let his friend fall behind. And Brian, I can just imagine him running after the train :(
Can't wait for next week's chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I can see Howie doing something like that for real. And the look on Brian's face when the train pulled away, from what I saw anyway was sad :O( lol
Date: 11/14/10 07:45 am Title: Chapter 26
Holy shit!!! What a cliffie! I love how you always manage to make me laugh even when the chap is full of suspense and action. The part about pig latin seriously made me LOL. And then, the smell of exploded ass made me LOL. I love to reference the smell of ass just because it's too funny! Those are things that I can imagine Nick saying or thinking. Great job and can't wait to read the next chap.
Author's Response: LOL thanks Sel. Yeah, I could see both AJ and Nick using that ass reference. I'm glad you guys like the humor mixed with the action. That makes me a happy Mare :O)
Date: 11/14/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 26
O_O he took Nick/Andrew. AH shit!
Author's Response: yes, he did! :O( poor Nick/Andrew whatever his name is lol Thanks for reading Bianca. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 11/14/10 03:36 am Title: Chapter 26
OMG!!! I knew they shouldn't have gone with Nickolas! Wow, this chapter was scary, made scarier by the fact that they're running around at night in the middle of a blizzard. Good use of atmosphere. I love the humor you put into Nick's narration, even in intense chapters like this; it lightens it up a little, like when Howie fell on his ass and Nick made the comment about it bringing out second languages and Pig Latin LOL. And the smell of urine in the subway - that line cracked me up. Eww LOL. But the end shocked me, wow!! Evil, evil cliffhanger once again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Sadly, I drew from personal experience when it came to describing the wonderful smells of the NYC subway system. lol Thanks for the compliment about using the atmosphere. I'm always kind of iffy when it comes to the action sequences. I'm glad you foudn the chapter scary. That was my intent. :O) Thanks for reading Julie!
