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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 35

well since there is still story and it's told fromNick's POV I'm gonna guess he doesn't die.  I have a brief thought that the click was a seatbelt or door closing or locks or something and Roger is going to leave him there alone, for the love of his wife or something, then go kill his family so he feels the same loss?  Continuing on...



Author's Response:

Sorry I'm not responding to all your reviews lol I doubt you'd want to read a response of just lol or yup or nopes.  Nick is alive, like I said I can't kill him. I'm too afraid of the karma fairy.

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 35

Nick's not going to die, puh-leez!

*is confident!*

 

i wish the boys are with him...i wonder though if the intend is to kill Nick, why still have the boys with Max? there's no need for bargaining chips if they kill Nick. so this whole cliffy my friend, is not necessary! Yup.



Author's Response:

LOL aww

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter 35

The parts about Nick as a child made me cry. I hate Roger!!! Of course I am curious as to this other kid they keep talking about...I wonder if we will ever find out about that? Maybe I'm just nosy lol. Great chapter. Sorry my review is so late, stupid technology. I had to do a little digging to find your story but I'm glad I got to read it again, I love it. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Aww, yes Roger is not a nice guy. The other kid is the miscarriage she had earlier on which is what sparked Nick's abduction in the first place. Glad to see you have your new phone! Thanks for reading Tracy! :O)

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 35

That was a mean cliffy! This chapter was really good though, so I guess it's ok =P Roger is just pure evil. I don't know how anyone could act that way towards a child. I really liked how you wrote Nick in this chapter. Very childlike, but also being very brave. Great job!

Author's Response:

I know! Sadly, there are people out there who treat kids like that. I'm glad this is only fiction lol and thanks for the compliment concerning Nick. Thanks for reading Steph!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 35

I love this story! But I still hate the cliffies ;)



Author's Response:

LOL thanks and sorry about the cliffies! I did do well for a little while without the cliffies, that's something, right?

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 35

This guy is really really crazy and I can tell he really doesn't care for anybody. Poor Nick :( I hope someone save him. Can't wait for another chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes, he's kind of a jerk, isn't he? Thanks for reading! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 11:13 am Title: Chapter 35

That is such a mean cliffy, but I'll forgive you because that chapter was awesome! Roger really is a monster, how could anyone want to drown a child or rip his heart out? And poor Nicole, sounds like she had a rough time with him too. I love how you wrote the end of that chapter, with Nick putting on a brave face, but then when he's facing death, he does what anyone would do and begs for his life.

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph. Yeah, I felt like it was important to make him panic and lose it at the end. I don't think it would have been realistic otherwise, not to say that any of this is realistic to begin with lol Sorry about the cliffy! lol

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 05:45 am Title: Chapter 35

LOL I knew you were gonna do this to us! This chapter was intense, between the flashbacks and what's happening in the present. Poor Nick! He is so brave and selfless, going by himself, not letting Brian or the other Boys come with, knowing that he might not come back, but wanting to save them from the same fate. Amazing chapter; I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

I didn't want to be too predictable and was actually gong to resolve this but decided against it lol Glad you liked it. Sometimes I think I make Nick a little too heroic but then I hope I made up for it with him panicing and almost wetting himself. Thanks for reading Julie and hope you feel better soon!

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 35

sooo does nick... I mean Andrew you know die or not ....hmmm

Author's Response:

LOL hrmm.... you'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 04:07 am Title: Chapter 35

Dude, that was just mean! Geeze, poor Nick having to relive that mentally, and then get an even worse version now. I love Brian for fighting to go with him. And Howie and AJ for being able to read him so well. :)

Somehow, I doubt Nick will die hehe, but I know you're not beyond torturing the hell out of him lol. *thinks back to MINE...*

Author's Response:

Thanks Rose! Yeah, That MINE thing was pretty mean lol We shall see what happens. :OP