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Reviewer: jess20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/13 09:17 am Title: Chapter 36

When a story has long been finished before I even start reading, I usually reserve my comments until the end, but I'm totally making an exception for one reason:

"Kevin would say things like he’d rather teach a retarded gopher how to play tennis. What the hell does that even mean? Is that some kind of stupid saying in Kentucky?"

I laughed for a good two minutes after reading this! 



Author's Response:

LOL glad to know I amused you! :O)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 36

oh damn Nickolas got away from Roger only to be shot by Nicole! what a rip off! damn she was alive this whole time and orchestrating it... I was starting to wonder in the last chapter if she was alive when Roger brought him somewhere and didn't just out right kill him when he tried to get away.  But damn...



Author's Response:

Yup yup. Nicole has lots of problems. 

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/11 04:10 am Title: Chapter 36

i dont think i've ever read a chapter this fast! i want to say i LOL at Nick's random thoughts but im so mad at you right now for the cliffy and pulling the trigger and NICKOLAS DONT YOU DARE DIE ON ME! *Nick will be fine...he has BSB immunity!*



Author's Response:

At least you get to read the next chapter right away. I made my poor readers wait a week for every chapter with a cliffy! They HATED me for it! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 36

Mare, I think I saw that episode of Supernatural. Was it the one with the little girl with the dolls house which was a duplicate of the hotel? And the little girl had drowned in the pool?

Author's Response:

Yup, that's the one! lol

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 36

What?! No I did not see that one coming! I am wondering who or what she shot! Evil cliffy, Mare! But the twist of Nicole being alive makes it worth it lol. I also enjoyed the part when Nick was ranting about how no one would teach him how to drive, and when Kevin said "he’d rather teach a retarded gopher how to play tennis" LOL! Loved this chapter, Mare! I am on the edge of my seat for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! lol glad you liked the gopher line. Like I told Tracy, I cracked myself up when I wrote that. Also i'm happy to know you didn't see the twist coming. Sorry about the cliffy, the new chapter is done so you won't have to wait that long! :O) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 36

No, I didn't see that coming! And what a cliffy too! I wonder if she killed herself, killed Nickolas or just fired the gun into the air? Loved that chapter Mare, I could just imagine her sitting in the wheelchair like in some kind of horror film.

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! We all have to remember that she is blind as well lol so she could have just hit a wall. lmao We'll have to wait and see. Sorry about the cliffy and just so you know since you are a new Supernatural watcher. I pictured the old lady sitting in a wheelchair scene from the episode where they go to an old hotel and find with the little girl ghost. I don't know if you've gotten there yet. She's who I pictured ion my head when I wrote that scene lol Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 08:35 am Title: Chapter 36

Intense stuff. How the heck is Nicole alive? My mind was blown by that! And this made me LOL "Kevin would say things like he’d rather teach a retarded gopher how to play tennis. What the hell does that even mean? Is that some kind of stupid saying in Kentucky?" HA. I also liked the part about Ophelia and Shakespeare lol. Awesome awesome chapter...it had me on the edge of my seat. Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! Also thanks for mentioning my favorite line in the entire chapter. I cracked myself up with the retarded gopher line. I had to put some kind of rodent in this story. It wouldn't be a Me story without including one! LOL Also glad you enjoyed the Ophelia thing as well. That was me trying to be clever. Thanks for the Feedback!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 06:44 am Title: Chapter 36

Okay, I didn't see that one coming. LOL. You'd think I would, seeing as everyone else who "died" is alive in this story. But Nicole? Oddly no. I did love the reaction he had, like part of him was drawn, and part of him knew it was just no good.

I have a feeling older Nickolas will have to suffer the consequences of Nick's words though :(.

You suck for cliffies though!

Author's Response:

LOL this one had to have a cliffy, now that i'm getting to the end, I have to put as many in as possible. I'm glad everyone was surpsied to see her alive. I really thought it was going to be one of those things that people were just kind of waiting to see happen. YAy for not being predictable! Thanks for reading Rose!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 05:42 am Title: Chapter 36

WOW!!! Even after everyone else in this story who Nick thought was dead turned out to be alive LOL, I didn't see that one coming, with him finding Nicole. As soon as he walked into the room and saw the woman in the wheelchair, I knew it had to be her, but up until that point, I had no idea. I'm glad he reacted to her the way he did; even if she was nicer to him than Roger was, the whole kidnapping thing is still creepy and wrong. I liked the comparison to a disappointed fan. Thanks for yet ANOTHER cliffhanger at the end! I'm thinking the older Nickolas is a goner... We shall see!

Author's Response:

I know, this is like the Day of our Lives of fanfic. They die but do they, really? LOL I always knew she was going to be alive but I have to admit she's the only one I ever intended from the beginning to keep alive. Jane was stubbourn and refused to stay dead! I thought it was important for Nick to be angry with her because yes, she did kidnap the poor kid. We shall see if you are correct when it comes to Nickolas. Thanks for reading Julie!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 05:39 am Title: Chapter 36

I so NOT see that one coming! OMG, Nicole is alive! I have so many questions on my mind right now, lol. Roger is an asshole, I hope he gets what he deserves for treat Nick that way. Amazing update!!



Author's Response:

Good, i'm glad you didn't see that coming lol I agree, Roger is an idiot! Thanks for the review :O)