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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 37

okay so Nickolas wasn't shot and killed....yet.  Will Max show if he thought Roger was going to be there? Of course he will he wants revenge for a death that didn't happen.  Love Nick's comment about how no on in his family seems to die. heehee



Author's Response:

thanks! I had to put that line in there because it tends to be true

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 37

i love drugged up Nick! and him poking fun at all the ppl who are supposed to be dead but not. and then saying he'll need lots of therapy sessions and then remembered his therapist is dead but maybe she'll be there at hte warehouse. LMAO forever!!

also, PHEW nickolas is alive and well and Nick got grazed!!!

that last scene with kevin...awwww



Author's Response:

lmao i'm getting a kick out of reading this along with you. you must really have a lot of time with no boss there! lol that's awesome! :O)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 06:22 am Title: Chapter 37

First off, glad that Nick is ok. Lol at AJ making fun of Nick when he passed out. That really cracked me up bc I can picture a scrawny AJ doing that. I can't wait to see what'll happen next. Hope the guys are safe!

Author's Response:

I can totally picture AJ laying on the floor like a dead dog at the expense of Nick lol Thanks for reading Sel!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 37

LOL streed cred.. that was funny. I'm glad that Nick just got grazed by the bullet. Nicole is a crazy lady.. I'm anxious to know what will happen in the warehouse! Great chapter, Mare! I'm sad this one is coming to an end :(

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! Yes, Nick now has his street cred! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 37

Biting my nails at the thought of what will happen in the warehouse! I'm glad Nick only got grazed by the bullet, but I have a feeling something worse than a graze is going to happen to someone.

Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Let's hope you're just being the voice of doom! lol Although it's doubtful ;OP Thanks for reading Steph!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 37

Good chapters, Mare! I had a lot of catching up to do, but it's been well worth the read!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed them. :O)

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 07:29 am Title: Chapter 37

Aw boo, the only real updated suspense story is almost over.lol As far as ideas go, you could always cover the "Lou Pearlman" issue, I think you and I talked about writing about that not long after that story broke. I started something, but got distracted by other writing. I foresee a good brotherly-angsty-kevin-back-in-the-picture type story with that. I don't know if that's the direction you want to go in, but just throwin' it out there. : )

Author's Response:

Oooh, I had forgotten all about that. I think I do have my idea already but that's another good one i'll have to think about! I mean come on, Kevin and Nick angst? What's not to love about that? Thanks Sam! lol

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 06:30 am Title: Chapter 37

just when i think i've figured out this whole story you upload another chapter and it makes me have no idea of whats going to happen next...

Author's Response:

LOL I hope that's a good thing and not a bad thing? Thanks for reading! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 37

OMG poor nicky :( LMAO at "street cred" Yeah AJ! Who's the bad Backstreet Boy now ROTF. That was awesome! Loved it!

Author's Response:

THanks Tracy! lol yes he can be a gangsta rapper now!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 37

I'm so happy Nick wasn't shoot. The pain must be terrible. I'm so excited for what is going to happen! But so sad the story is coming to an end :( Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :O)


Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:37 am Title: Chapter 37

Ooh, another intense chapter - loved it!! I really thought Nickolas was a goner, so I was impressed that you had Nick get shot instead... glad he was only grazed, though. I was cracking up at his line about his therapist being dead, for now, but she'll probably be at the warehouse LOL. The comic relief in this story is great! Also loved Kevin getting bossed around for a change. I'm sad to see this story ending, but excited for the next chapter to find out what happens! I hope you get a new story idea soon; I love having you writing again! I'd love another suspense from you; those are my favorites.

Author's Response:

Thanks Julie! I think i'd love to go suspense again as well. It's just tough coming up with new ideas. Yeah, I knew I wasn't going to let Nicole kill Nickolas, that would be too expected. Yay to the comic relief and yes, it was fun to have Kevin get bossed around! I'm sure he hates it but it serves him right for leaving the group. But at least i'm not killing him....yet! LOL

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:33 am Title: Chapter 37

Sorry, I didn't know AC would cut off reviews lmfao. I got too wordy. Awesome. So, sorry about all the review notices you'll be getting lmao.

All I wanted to add, as that the line I quoted was definitely a fave. Loved it LOL.

Author's Response:

lmao thanks! I was sitting here and suddenly got like 6 email notifications about reviews and was like "Damn!" Glad you enjoyed that line. I actually added it in after I finished the chapter as an afterthought!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 37

Awwww Nick got almost-shot! LOL. Poor Nick, because he's not dealing with enough right now. I love how Nick's making jokes throughout the entire thing. I was cracking up, and really, I could see Nick reacting that way. Cause what else can you do but try to make light of it so you don't go insane? LOL. Um...I'll try to come up with an idea for you? But what happened to that one you started before? I've been wanting to see you do it since it's a bit different for you lol.

“But I didn’t and apparently no one in this family actually ever dies anyway.”

Author's Response:

LOL I can see him making jokes and nervously laughing too. The new idea I had i've decided to not make a BSB fic. It wasn't working for me because of the female lead thing. I was hating it. I am still going to work on it but as an OF I think. I might post it on AC, still, just the first chapter but not sure. I'd hate to post it and have people like it and then decide not to do anything with it. Stupid female lead dilemma! Thanks Rose!