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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/12 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 38

oh damn Roger did kill him after all, see what you get for not having the guts to kill him Nickolas!



Author's Response:

Hehe ;)

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/11 05:04 am Title: Chapter 38

honestly mare. i knew this is coming but i was holding on to all hope i was wrong. i shld never have pictured him as the 2001!Nick cause now it hurts even more. i need to remind myself that this is a fic. not really life. im so heartbroken omg what is wrong with me?!



Author's Response:

oopsies! LOL Sorry :O( I wish I could stay awake to see your reaction to the last two chapters but it's past my bedtime. Thanks so much for reading this! Your opinion always means so much to me! Hope your day gets better as well! :O)

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/11 03:22 am Title: Chapter 38

That was a very action packed chapter! Kevin is my new hero lol. I liked the mix between action and Nick's goofy comments. You made it all blend together really well! Great chapter, on to the next one :)

Author's Response:

I love Kevin when he tries to be a hero and of course we need goofy Nick comments! Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 06:58 am Title: Chapter 38

I loved this! Incredibly action packed and I love that the random muffin lady was in on this too! LMFAO. I cracked up at the line about Kevin acting like Mel in Braveheart. I could SO see Kevin pulling it lmao. And Brian being offended cause AJ hit a girl, LMAO. Dear Brian, those rules don't apply when she's trying to kill you! LOL.

Can't wait for the last two chapters. *sniffs* Can't believe it's almost over!

Author's Response:

Thanks Rose. Yes, I had to bring back the muffin lady and make her  a bad guy and I can totally see Brian being offended by AJ hitting a girl even if it's a psycho one. Thanks for reading. I'm kind of sad it's coming to and end as well. I should have put Kevin in a kilt! lol

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 11:17 am Title: Chapter 38

I should've known that their supposedly easy escape was too good to be true! Laughed at AJ hiding to avoid the fighting, and imagined Howie all Tony Montana as he fought the bad guys, lol. Poor Nickolas though, can't see him surviving that gunshot. Wonder what Roger will do next AND how many bullets are in his gun!

Great as always Mare :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! Yes, things are looking grim for Nickolas but remember how this story has gone thus far lol You never know! Roger is a jerktopus! :O) I just made that word up! go me!!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 38

Thank you snowpocolypse! lol Uh-oh, Roger's back... and boo to only two more chapters. : ( Oh and...keep going snowpocolypse! lol

Author's Response:

LOL the snowpocolypse is officially over but we are expecting ANOTHER storm on Saturday but that's the day I regularly update anyway. Thanks for reading SAM!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 07:30 am Title: Chapter 38

So the Muffin Lady WAS in on it the whole time! I knew it! LMAO. It was scary having everyone together in this chapter, but I loved the comic relief of Nick's narration. Some o my favorite parts were the mental image of Kevin running with his fist in the air like Mel Gibson in Braveheart, him wishing Howie would say "say hello to my little friend," and thinking his brother was like a teenage mutant ninja turtle LOL. I knew Nickolas was gonna get shot. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL I got a kick out of Kevin as Mel too! I can see him being dorky enough to do that. I personally enjoyed AJ cowering int he corner and knocking the muffin lady out! Thanks for reading Julie! Hope you enjoyed your snow day!

Reviewer: backstreetsbabyg Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 03:45 am Title: Chapter 38

I love how the muffin lady is a constant character through out the whole story so far..lol
PS for story ideas... U could always do a story abou them trying to leave their old management (lou pearlman, donna wright...ect)....I don't think you've done that yet??

Author's Response:

Thanks! Well you have to mention the muffin lady from time to time lol THanks for the idea. I haven't done that but i have done a few Lou as a bad guy stories.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter 38

You are the best at suspense! OMG, I hope Nickolas it's okay :( I so loved Kevin in this chapter lol. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment! Yay to Kevin love! lol and thanks for the review! :O)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 38

mare- i`ve been enjoying this story. i`ve had quite a few chapters to catch up with. always love your kevin & nick!! sad to see this story is coming to an end....

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Carrie. I'm glad to know you've been reading it. It's always fun to write Kevin and Nick and i'm sad to see it end as well.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 02:40 am Title: Chapter 38

Whoo ass kicking Kevin saves the day! There's just something about an angry Kevin that sends fear into people LOL! OMG at Roger....can't wait for the next chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat with this action! Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! gotta love ass kicking Kevin. Either he's kicking other people's asses or i'm kicking his! :O)