Date: 08/30/10 03:44 am Title: Chapter 14
Jane's not his real mother. You know, in real life, I think Nick would be happy to hear that LOL. That said, I knew that something had to be up. Loved the chapter of course, and you had me going for a bit with Nick's dream. Thought it was real till things went wonky LOL. :)
Author's Response: LOL thanks Rose? Although I want to say I can't tell because you're so bright and vivid! :P I love the word wonky! And it's sad that you're probably right about Jane. I kind of wish this woman was his real mother as well.
Date: 08/30/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow so Nick did see something. These dreams are freaky! I had to laugh at grandpa Kevin. He does remind me of a grandpa. Great chapter as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, you can always count on grandpa Kevin. Thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 08/29/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's going to be posted later on tonight :O)
Date: 08/26/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 13
can't wait to read more, I hope they find Bob.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 08/25/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ok...the part about Kevin holding the bible as a weapon was so funny. Bob is obviously in some type of shady business...very interested to find out more. That whole visit was just weird. I'd be freaking out too. I also liked the part where Nick is guessing that AJ would be an alcoholic. Cool way to fit that in. Thanks for another chap! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sel. Yeah, not sure why I made him grab a bible but I went with it lol thanks for the AJ mention as well. I thought I would throw that in there for good measure. :O)
Date: 08/25/10 08:58 am Title: Chapter 13
Well, I didn't expect that! I thought Max was going to hold them at gun point or something. But he's there to watch out for them instead, hmm, I wonder who else is involved and what Jane has to do with it all.
Loved the antler present for AJ though :) Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph. Yup, Max is there to help. :O) Things will all start falling into place slowly. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/25/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 13
You should be earlier on that update! I'm confused but I know I'm supposed to be LOL, like Nick is :P. That Max guy is...well weird. You can tell Bob's totally involved in something shady, you just can't guess what it is. Loved it!
Author's Response: YAY I'm just happy someone reviewed. Thanks Rose, I was starting to get a really big complex. Yup, the whole purpose is to be confused as poor Nick is. lol
Date: 08/23/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow.. I sure didn't expect that last paragraph.. Great job, but still.. the cliffhanger, do you have to be this way? ;)
Author's Response:
why yes...yes I do lol :O) Thanks for reading! New update tomorrow so it won't actually be that much of a cliffy for you!
Date: 08/23/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 12
I know I'm late reading this, Mare, sorry! But I just got caught up, and WOW!! The end, OMG! I'm kinda glad I'm late now because I can't wait for the next chapter, and now it will come sooner! I loved the rest of the chapter too; LMFAO at them peforming for a bunch of clowns! You were spot on with AJ! LMAO Keep it up!
Author's Response:
aww, that's okay. I know we're all going to start getting busy lol and yes, I know it was a mean cliffy. :O) hehe Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/20/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh god, what a cliffhanger!!!!
I loved the way AJ reacted to the clowns and the way they teased him about it. I'm also glad that everyone is looking out for Nick and taking his Dad's vanishing act seriously.
Can't wait for more, need to know who this guy is and what he wants!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph. Sorry about the cliffy but you'll know more about the guy next update! :O)
Date: 08/20/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Aw, it was a bad day because you heard that the boys and New Kids On the Block might be going on tour together, right? It was for me! lol Anyway, your story, although serious, was a bright spot in the day. My real question is, how did that guy get their pizzas? lmao For real though, I can't wait to see A) Kevin's reaction, B) what this guy has to say, and who he is. Thanks Mare.
The "45?" thing was funny too.
Author's Response:
I wish that was all it was but yes, the NKOTB news just made me want to poke someone's eyes out. Blech! I left out the part about mugging the pizza guy lol
Date: 08/20/10 03:15 am Title: Chapter 12
How could you leave it like that?! MEAN! I'm finally caught up. I was back on chapter two or something. Huge fail on my part because it's been pretty brilliant. I look forward to the next update because I really need to know who this dude is.
Author's Response:
Thanks Julilly. I had to have a few mean cliffies in here! :O)
Date: 08/20/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 12
This has been my first week of school with the kids and I really needed this diversion. I missed the appearance on Geoge Lopez, but AJ really had me laughing with his clown-phobia. I love the light heartedness of this chapter after all the previous angst and drama. "Mr. Stalker" has become very bold, hasn't he?! Another great installment, Mare. And I hope your day ends with a better night.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam! School is the reason for the stress so no good night in sight but the reviews are helping. Hope you're school year is starting off better than mine will lol
Date: 08/20/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 12
Awwww poor Nick but I love how not only the Boys but the Boys' families are there to support him. LMFAO at the clown chapter, and the fact I know you wrote this before the Lopez video. Poor AJ, that would totally be his version of hell! LMFAO.
GAH! With how you ended it! Not cool! :P lol.
Author's Response:
I know, right? So weird! I know it was a mean cliffy lol Thanks, Rose. :O)
Date: 08/20/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 12
Holy cow!! So hopefully we find out more about this guy soon. Loved the part about Nick saying Kevin was 45. LOL. I would be panicking too. And the clown convention was epic. I can't blame AJ, I'm scared of clowns too.
Sorry about your bad day :( hope your night is better!
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! I enjoyed writing about the clowns and the 45 part. Thanks for reading.
