Date: 08/08/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Mare, I love the mix of humor and suspense in each chapter. The part about howie's wink had me cracking up. And "He had long, pointy feet" cracked me up for some reason too. I love the BSB slumber party and the fact that they're all sleeping around him to protect him. That dream was some freaky stuff. Can't wait for the next chap!
Author's Response:
Thanks Sel! LOL I love winking Howie and the guys protecting Nick. :O) New chapter tomorrow.
Date: 08/06/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 9
just as it was getting good, you stopped it lol. Update soon.
Author's Response:
LOL I'm not sure how to take that so i'm going with compliment? You know me, I enjoy my cliffies! Thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 08/05/10 08:16 am Title: Chapter 9
As always, I really enjoyed reading and was on the edge of my seat. I'm wondering about these dreams though, wodering whether the dark haired woman is his mum is disguise or something like that (can't remember is it's been mentioned how she died).
Looking forward to Monday for the next part!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I love how you try to figure it out in the reviews! You were right about Bob not showing up, we'll see if you're right about Jane in disguise. lol
Date: 08/05/10 04:30 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh yeah! I knew there was something else I was gonna mention and left out of my review... The truth or dare part! *snort* I'll say it again - I freakin love you! LOL
Author's Response:
hehe ;O)
Date: 08/05/10 04:28 am Title: Chapter 9
I love you, Mare! For as scary as this situation has gotten, with Nick's dad missing, I laughed a lot in this chapter (up until the dream, anyway). Cheese Doodles... Backstreet slumber parties/Nick sleeping in the tub... and the whole paragraph about winking Howie made me laugh out loud so hard, I'm sure my neighbors heard me! LMFAO I loved the conversation the guys had when they thought Nick was asleep. I love them being so good to him, sleeping on the floor around him just to make him feel safer. I'm so glad you're writing this story; I miss old-school group stories like this! And then the dream happened... ahh!!! I don't even know what to say, except I want to know more, and I know you're not gonna answer all our questions anytime soon, so I guess I'll just have to look forward to the next chapter and the next dream! Keep up the amazing work on this! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy to hear you say that you laughed because that's what I try to do form chapter to chapter. I'm trying to blend in some humor to breakup the suspense a little bit. Gotta love winking Howie lol And I miss these stories too. Thanks for reading and for the feedback Julie!
Date: 08/05/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow. That's scary that Nick's dad vanished like that! The dream was weird...wonder who was after him and what it could all mean.
Author's Response:
We shall see! Thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 08/05/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 9
I love it so far of course lol. Nick's dreams keep getting worse don't they? Poor guy. Can't believe there's no trace of Bob yet. At least he has the Boys, otherwise I couldn't imagine how he could be dealing with this alone.
Author's Response:
Yup, the boys are a godesnd for him. Thanks Rose! :O)
Date: 08/05/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Maaaareeeee. What the heck is going on? I am more confused now than before, but I'm pretty sure that Nick and his dad ended up in some sort of Witness Protection Program. Of course, I'm starting to think that his dad was a bad guy, but who knows? (Besides you, I mean lol) Anyway, thanks a lot. You've left me wondering and with more questions than answers, but I guess I'll just have to wait for Monday.
LOL at Howie's wink showing up in every story, it seems :P
Author's Response:
Yup, I guess I have to include a winking Howie in every story. Sorry you're confused. Hopefully as we go along things will start making more sense for you. Thanks for reading Sarah!
Date: 08/02/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
"You guys didn't actually think i'd make it that easy to find out what's happening did you?" I was hoping! :-0 Now, what has happened to Bob? And who is the man "following" Nick? Curiouser and curiouser.
“He’s not alone.” Kevin said as he walked around the corner. “He’s with me.” This was my favorite part! I love me some protective Kevin!
Once again, great installment, Mare. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam! lol that was actually my favorite part of the entire chapter as well. *sighs* I miss having protective Kevin around all the time.
Date: 08/01/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I heart uber-protective Kevin. lol It's nice to see that Nick is no longer the only one trippin' about all this stuff anymore, that the other guys are starting to see it too. Can't wait to find out who this creeper is too.
Author's Response:
Uber-protective Kevin rocks! lol I think we all need one of those! Thanks Sam! :O)
Date: 07/31/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
I had a feeling Nick's Dad wasn't going to arrive! But I wonder what's happened to him?
As for the creepy guy, when he was stood outside the toilet cubicle I was starting to really worry, but thank god someone came in and created an escape for him!
Can't wait for more, you have me completely hooked and wondering what's going to happen next!
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I knew you kind of figured out he wasn't going to be there just by the last review you had left for me. I'm so happy to hear you're hooked! :O)
Date: 07/31/10 02:54 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow. If I were Nick I'd be feeling sick to my stomach at this point. Pretty sure my stomach wanted to make a break for it in Nick's honor. I loved it :)
Author's Response:
I know! I would too. Thanks Rose :O)
Date: 07/31/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG Mare! I felt so sad for Nick in this chapter! :( What happened to his dad?? I should have known you wouldn't make it that easy... I figured we wouldn't really learn much in this chapter, but I didn't expect his dad not to even show. And the freaky guy with the pointy shoes... creepy!! I'm glad Kevin and Howie saw him so at least they know Nick isn't crazy. I was afraid Nick was gonna get abducted from the bathroom there for awhile. Wonder what's going to happen now? I love this story, so suspenseful!! I can never predict where your stories are going, and I love that about them!
Author's Response:
Thanks Julie! Yeah, I was hoping that even though everyone knew I wouldn't actually tell them what was going to happen, they still wouldn't see dad just not showing up. Thanks again! :O)
Date: 07/30/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Eekkkkk this is scaring me! That hit was definitely following him and Nick has every right to be freaked out. I wonder what happened to his dad though, that was weird! Poor Nick. UPDATE
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for the feedback! :O)
Date: 07/28/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 7
With each dream, a little more is revealed making this mystery so very tantalizing for me. For Nick....not so much. I loved the dream sequence where Nick is, figuratively, two people... Andrew and Nick. Mare, I am always impressed with your characterizations; they always pull the reader into the story. I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Pammy! :O) I hope I won't disappoint you! By the way i'm updating Scars tomorrow! LOL
