Date: 02/24/11 06:11 am Title: Chapter 40
eeeeppp!!!!! im sad for nick, probably the same thing the guys would be feeling if this is like, real, lol. everybody knows but Nick. to have a brother you dont even know about, there all along is just...sigh. but im so glad he's not dead! haha...i wonder where the parents are...im pretty sure they're still alive :)
the awesome thing about this fic is that i stopped picturing jane and bob as the real life jane and bob (boy that would be annoying and LOL worthy..them being CIA agents? ahahahahaha) so i keep picturing some awesome secret agent couple instead :D
congratulations on finishing this fic mare!!! 40 chapters of awesome!!!! :DDDD cant wait to start the new fic!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read it, Mersey. It means a lot to me. You know how much your input means. I loved writing this one, I think it's my new favorite story. And yes Bob and Jane are alive. No one really dies in this story lol exceot the bad guy! Hope this made your day a little better!
Date: 02/24/11 05:16 am Title: Chapter 39
omg seriously what are you trying to do to me?! yes, im that selfish, this is all about me and my feeling and how you keep breaking it when i really should be doing some work right now.
WHAT IS GOING ON???!!!
i had to take a deep breath, when was the last time i needed a time out from a fic cause i get too caught up reading it? since forever, that's what. you dont already know, i LOVE THIS FIC LIKE A LOVING THING but im not over my heartbroken phase right now. /INCONSOLABLE
Author's Response:
LOL aww thanks!
Date: 02/24/11 05:04 am Title: Chapter 38
honestly mare. i knew this is coming but i was holding on to all hope i was wrong. i shld never have pictured him as the 2001!Nick cause now it hurts even more. i need to remind myself that this is a fic. not really life. im so heartbroken omg what is wrong with me?!
Author's Response:
oopsies! LOL Sorry :O( I wish I could stay awake to see your reaction to the last two chapters but it's past my bedtime. Thanks so much for reading this! Your opinion always means so much to me! Hope your day gets better as well! :O)
Date: 02/24/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 37
i love drugged up Nick! and him poking fun at all the ppl who are supposed to be dead but not. and then saying he'll need lots of therapy sessions and then remembered his therapist is dead but maybe she'll be there at hte warehouse. LMAO forever!!
also, PHEW nickolas is alive and well and Nick got grazed!!!
that last scene with kevin...awwww
Author's Response:
lmao i'm getting a kick out of reading this along with you. you must really have a lot of time with no boss there! lol that's awesome! :O)
Date: 02/24/11 04:10 am Title: Chapter 36
i dont think i've ever read a chapter this fast! i want to say i LOL at Nick's random thoughts but im so mad at you right now for the cliffy and pulling the trigger and NICKOLAS DONT YOU DARE DIE ON ME! *Nick will be fine...he has BSB immunity!*
Author's Response:
At least you get to read the next chapter right away. I made my poor readers wait a week for every chapter with a cliffy! They HATED me for it! lol
Date: 02/24/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 35
Nick's not going to die, puh-leez!
*is confident!*
i wish the boys are with him...i wonder though if the intend is to kill Nick, why still have the boys with Max? there's no need for bargaining chips if they kill Nick. so this whole cliffy my friend, is not necessary! Yup.
Author's Response:
LOL aww
Date: 02/24/11 04:01 am Title: Chapter 34
Max, this rubbing chin and licking your lips will get you killed some day. i dont know how, but it has to happen!
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: 02/24/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 33
i have nothing coherent to say. im clicking NEXT right now! ok, after i click submit.
ps: we have a roger at work and he's a major douchebag. it's not difficult to hate your curtis/roger at all!
Author's Response:
I have never met a Roger who isn't a douche bag lol You don't have to leave me a review for every chapter you know. I already know you love me, hopefully you will still love me throughout the rest!
Date: 02/24/11 03:39 am Title: Chapter 32
it pains me but i have a feeling Nickolas will not survive this. and i forgot to mention how i love the fact that Nick referred to both Kevin and Nickolas as his 'two older brothers' last chap.
also, little brother!!!
*hopes Nickolas survives this*
Author's Response:
aww having a feeling of forboding are we? :OP lol
Date: 02/24/11 03:33 am Title: Chapter 31
ok my review got eaten so 2nd try!
wtf i shouldnt even be reviewing cause i needed NEXT like 10 seconds ago!
but i have to say that ever since this chap mentions the similarities btw Nickolas and Nick (andrew i guess...no!!!!), i've been picturing young!Nick and 2001!Nick together and that makes me very happy :DDDD
Author's Response:
lmao I still can't really get a vivid picture of what he looks like in my mind.
Date: 02/24/11 02:36 am Title: Chapter 30
brotherly bonding makes me glee :D *is hopeful* and wow, I'm mentally exhausted just reading all this new info we got in this chap! LOL @ nick saying to give us a moment after finding out the safe house belongs to the Richardson, cause my mind really wanted one!
Author's Response:
ooh yes, I thought you'd enjoy that! lol
Date: 02/24/11 02:25 am Title: Chapter 29
i love snarky Nick! and the eye-rolling and EVERYTHING! im curious to find out more about Nickolas. i think once this is over, both of them should go somewhere and get to know each other. It's always nice to have a sibling that cares. i hope this is true for Nickolas.
Author's Response:
I agree. Gotta love the good siblings!
Date: 02/24/11 02:04 am Title: Chapter 28
i remember reading this chapter before but figured i'd refresh myself since THE BOSS IS NOT AROUND woot woot! that last line, CHILLS! ALSO, Nickolas is Nick's brother from a different mother then? and Nick's name isnt really Nick? and Max best not be using the boys as bargaining chips!!
Author's Response:
aww lol I don't remember where you are.
Date: 02/24/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter 27
holy crap. did you change the ending to this chapter? cause i swear the last time i read it, that last cliffy wasnt there! So...WILL THE REAL NICKOLAS PLEASE JUST STAND UP!!
Author's Response:
Probably? Honestly I can't remember lol
Date: 02/22/11 03:36 am Title: Chapter 40
LOVED the ending. LOVE! I thought it was perfect. It really tied everything together - how in the beginning Nick knew nothing and only had small snippets of memory, same as sort of at the end. The last line I thought fit perfectly. It was very Nickish lol and summed up the entire story very well. Random memory said through a random-ass comment. Fantastic. Great job on this story, Mare! I really enjoyed reading it :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Steph! Thanks for sticking with it the whole way through :O)
