Date: 02/06/11 04:34 am Title: Chapter 39
Ugh, you HAD to end the second to last chapter on a cliffy, didn't you? I guess we'll be lucky if the whole story doesn't end that way! LOL Nickolas dying was sad, but YAY, Max was on the good side the whole time! Love it!! Not looking forward to Nick having to say goodbye to the guys and go into hiding... I kinda hope the way it ended will change their plans. Can't wait to see how it all turns out! This story has been an interesting ride; I'm sad to see it end.
Author's Response:
Yes I did have to end it on a cliffy lol Thanks for sticking with the roller coaster ride. It has been an interesting one. :O)
Date: 02/06/11 04:21 am Title: Chapter 39
oh my gosh.... what was nick going to say?? and yay Max is a good guy i knew it all along :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Glad to know someone never lost faith in Max! Oh and Nick was about to say "I..." :OP
Date: 02/06/11 04:03 am Title: Chapter 39
Last chapter? After this one? How? What? Uh? There seems to be so much more! And you're gonna make me wait another week!?! MEANIE!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, that's mean lol maybe if I feel inspired i'll post the last chapter mid week. Doubtful though, because I have to be as mean as possible! Thanks for reading Jen! :O)
Date: 02/06/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 39
You really know how to end chapters, lol! OMG, Max was working with Nick's dad? What a suprise! I can't believe it. I SO hate Roger! And I can't believe this is going to end :( I'm so waiting for the last chapter!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Roger is a tool. :O) That's why I shot him in head! hehe
Date: 02/06/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 39
Awwwww no hiding for Nick :( Holy hell at the ending. You're mean! LOL.
And Max was working with Nick's dad? Okay that one caught me by surprise. I didn't actually see that one coming. See, I love that about your stories, you always keep me guessing. Though Nickolas won't die cause people in Nick's family never really die lmao. And Nick shouldn't go back to Andrew :P haha. He's Nick darn it.
Loved the chapter. I'll miss this story after next week. :)
Author's Response:
I know, that was a mean cliffy but I had to. I mean it's the second to last chapter! You gotta GO OUT WITH A BANG! Hahaha get it? A BANG! I'm so punny! Glad you didn't see the whole Max thing. I kept telling you guys I liked him. Would I like a bad guy? You'll have to wait and see what happens. I mean they all did just explode lol
Date: 02/04/11 06:58 am Title: Chapter 38
I loved this! Incredibly action packed and I love that the random muffin lady was in on this too! LMFAO. I cracked up at the line about Kevin acting like Mel in Braveheart. I could SO see Kevin pulling it lmao. And Brian being offended cause AJ hit a girl, LMAO. Dear Brian, those rules don't apply when she's trying to kill you! LOL.
Can't wait for the last two chapters. *sniffs* Can't believe it's almost over!
Author's Response:
Thanks Rose. Yes, I had to bring back the muffin lady and make her a bad guy and I can totally see Brian being offended by AJ hitting a girl even if it's a psycho one. Thanks for reading. I'm kind of sad it's coming to and end as well. I should have put Kevin in a kilt! lol
Date: 02/03/11 11:17 am Title: Chapter 38
I should've known that their supposedly easy escape was too good to be true! Laughed at AJ hiding to avoid the fighting, and imagined Howie all Tony Montana as he fought the bad guys, lol. Poor Nickolas though, can't see him surviving that gunshot. Wonder what Roger will do next AND how many bullets are in his gun!
Great as always Mare :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! Yes, things are looking grim for Nickolas but remember how this story has gone thus far lol You never know! Roger is a jerktopus! :O) I just made that word up! go me!!
Date: 02/03/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 38
Thank you snowpocolypse! lol Uh-oh, Roger's back... and boo to only two more chapters. : ( Oh and...keep going snowpocolypse! lol
Author's Response:
LOL the snowpocolypse is officially over but we are expecting ANOTHER storm on Saturday but that's the day I regularly update anyway. Thanks for reading SAM!
Date: 02/03/11 07:30 am Title: Chapter 38
So the Muffin Lady WAS in on it the whole time! I knew it! LMAO. It was scary having everyone together in this chapter, but I loved the comic relief of Nick's narration. Some o my favorite parts were the mental image of Kevin running with his fist in the air like Mel Gibson in Braveheart, him wishing Howie would say "say hello to my little friend," and thinking his brother was like a teenage mutant ninja turtle LOL. I knew Nickolas was gonna get shot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
LOL I got a kick out of Kevin as Mel too! I can see him being dorky enough to do that. I personally enjoyed AJ cowering int he corner and knocking the muffin lady out! Thanks for reading Julie! Hope you enjoyed your snow day!
Date: 02/03/11 03:45 am Title: Chapter 38
I love how the muffin lady is a constant character through out the whole story so far..lol
PS for story ideas... U could always do a story abou them trying to leave their old management (lou pearlman, donna wright...ect)....I don't think you've done that yet??
Author's Response:
Thanks! Well you have to mention the muffin lady from time to time lol THanks for the idea. I haven't done that but i have done a few Lou as a bad guy stories.
Date: 02/03/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter 38
You are the best at suspense! OMG, I hope Nickolas it's okay :( I so loved Kevin in this chapter lol. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment! Yay to Kevin love! lol and thanks for the review! :O)
Date: 02/03/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 38
mare- i`ve been enjoying this story. i`ve had quite a few chapters to catch up with. always love your kevin & nick!! sad to see this story is coming to an end....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Carrie. I'm glad to know you've been reading it. It's always fun to write Kevin and Nick and i'm sad to see it end as well.
Date: 02/03/11 02:40 am Title: Chapter 38
Whoo ass kicking Kevin saves the day! There's just something about an angry Kevin that sends fear into people LOL! OMG at Roger....can't wait for the next chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat with this action! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tracy! gotta love ass kicking Kevin. Either he's kicking other people's asses or i'm kicking his! :O)
Date: 02/01/11 06:22 am Title: Chapter 37
First off, glad that Nick is ok. Lol at AJ making fun of Nick when he passed out. That really cracked me up bc I can picture a scrawny AJ doing that. I can't wait to see what'll happen next. Hope the guys are safe!
Author's Response:
I can totally picture AJ laying on the floor like a dead dog at the expense of Nick lol Thanks for reading Sel!
Date: 01/31/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 37
LOL streed cred.. that was funny. I'm glad that Nick just got grazed by the bullet. Nicole is a crazy lady.. I'm anxious to know what will happen in the warehouse! Great chapter, Mare! I'm sad this one is coming to an end :(
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! Yes, Nick now has his street cred! :O)
