Date: 07/09/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well at least they agree on him seeing the kids whenever he wants to. I do agree with her mom that she needs to talk to him before he takes the easy way out. I di think he still loves her as she loves him they need time for each other. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Ann is a cool mom. I think she is going to be a great support for Ashton.
Date: 07/09/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 7
I had to read it at all, Chapter 5 till this 7.. man... I'm almost in tears, not crying because I"m not alone... this is so sad, messed up... Jesus... Jacks is just like Nick... man.... Carter, you can't mess up with your kids minds! This is a Family... Jesus.. I sense that something will happen to the kids or Ash so he can face the reality of lose them.. for real.
Author's Response: Hopefully Nick will come to his senses.
Date: 07/09/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I found this story yesterday on my most recents and I have to say It's well done for what is so far. keep workin at it! I'm likin what I see.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you like the rest of it.
Date: 07/09/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 6
Aw man you almost made me cry. She is still very much in love with Nick and I think he still loves her he just doesn't know how to express it. I really hope he works it out in time. When her family visits I hope they are there for her but don't put Nick down because it will come back to haunt them. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I think her family will be cool. Maybe one older brother may have a "talk" with Nick. Got to love big brothers. LOL!!!
Date: 07/08/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh this is so sad however I think in the long run it will be better for them. I just hope she will take him back and that people will understand when/if she does. Keep up the great work. Awesome story.
Date: 07/08/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
and he had the nerve to leave a note? no wonder Jackson is mad at him, what a jerk.
Date: 07/07/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
He haves a double personality issue? Because one time he hates her and on the other he's making love with her! GO SEE A DOCTOR CARTER!
Date: 07/07/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jesus that was so sad I'm crying! Jacks saying that he would take care of his mom... man... MY heart is broke! He haves Nick's passion.... I can see that....
I'm loving it!
Author's Response: Jacks is definitely a momma's boy. He loves his dad, but don't mess with his mommy. Rachel is daddy's little girl. She is happy, laid-back, and a litte crazy.
Date: 07/07/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh that was sad. You can tell Nick really loves his kids but needs time. I think they both do. That or alone time with each other. I hope they can work it out. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I think Nick needs some time to think about his relationship with Ashton. He's in a funk.
Date: 07/07/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this story started off sad :( Great storyline...and your story is very well written so far.
Date: 07/07/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Uh huh he doesn't love her anymore but is willing to sleep with her. Such a man. He sounds like he doesn't know what he wants And she sounds like she is willing to do anything to fix the marriage. Awesome story keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you.
Marguerite
Date: 07/07/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh what a bastard however there are two sides to every story And I can't wait to read his. I do hope they end up back together. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/07/10 05:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Again: WTH did into his non brain cells to wake up and say: I don't love you and I want the divorce. Lord.... *shaking head*
Date: 07/07/10 03:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Seriously!! I will KICK him in his balls! C'mon! Face the reality, you AREN'T a kid any longer.. you HAVE kids! Man.... loving girl!
I will appear in this story and MAKE HIM FACE THE REALITY!
Date: 07/07/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for all the reviews. I am glad you like the story so far.