Date: 07/28/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
ahhh.... i thought nick and paige would catch them!!!! buuut... they had luck! ;o)
iīd loved to see nickīs reaction!!! damn... ^^ lol i know iīm bad.... ;o)
hmmm... andy is nice and lindsay likes him very much... maybe itīs really time for a new chapter in her life...
BUT you know my opinion... NICK&LINDSAY FOREVER... yeah yeah i know, the babies...
oh the boys and the girls spent a night without each other... NICE... ^^ canīt wait to read about it....
LOOOOVE your story!!! iīm craving for more!!! greetings from austria!!!
Date: 07/28/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
liked to see Nick and Paige would discover Linds and Andy have sex. Love the story. Good work.
Milla
Date: 07/27/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
poor paige... i truly feel with her!!! iīve been there too! but when the little princess is there, she will forget everything!!
and big boobs...hmmm..seems like nick is only turned on more!! ;o)
nick and lindsay will work on their song...i hope andy and paige donīt get jealous because they spend more time together than usual!!!!
i LOVE, that they sing song together but i think i say that enough in my last review!!! ;o)
i still LOOOOOVE your story, like i always say!! PLEASE, donīt be sad...there are so many readers that reviews a few times...please update soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *a little impatient, as always is*
greetings!!!!
Date: 07/27/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
maybe its going to be twins and one is just hiding. amazing job cant wait for more.
Date: 07/27/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
ohhh... what a pity...you lost one of your reviewer :(
but don't mind, i love your story, no matter how it goes on... of course i love the storyline and linds and nick... and paige;)... but i read your story, because i love, HOW you write... and yes, this story isn't like the others but it's good so... otherwise, it would be boring ;)
poor paige... i know this feeling to feel fat and uncomfortable and not attractive... but it will pass soon :D and nick has already shown her, how sexy she is in his eyes^^
i wonder, what paige will say, when she hears the song, which linds and nick sing together??? i mean... she will know immediately, that he wrote this song for her... okay, i know, there's no jealousy between them anymore...but i'm curios, how she will react...
great chapter as always.... and i can't wait for more... MEL=)
Date: 07/27/10 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
uhm sorry I left you :/ the story isn't so good like the others were. i read the past couple of chapter and I don't get a long with the story anymore. I really hope there will be a happy end for Paige and Nick. But one thing I don't get is did Lindsay, Paige and Nick had their streamy sex night?I mean all of them would have deserve it coz they still love each other and it would be a proper goodbye to their common sex life. would have love to read this ;) You haven't writen bout it :( or did they just cuddle? Anyways i am sorry but i really don't get into this story ... please take care and keep it going the others still like it and I am happy for you :) so please update for them asap :) and I always will be team PAIGE & NICK :D
Date: 07/26/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow... nick wrote a song for lindsay... the lyrics... awwww....for me it sounds like a declaration of love and somehow it is one...
okay... it's one thing to sing this song with nick in the studio, but to know, it will be on his album, is really exciting!!! btw... i didn't know, that linds can sing so well :D
it's great, that andy and linds had gotten closer... and now, he really likes paige??? good... she is an inherent part in lindsays life and nothing will change that... i'm glad, andy accepts that now...i'm sure, otherwise he had lost her...
OMG... what's the matter with andys parents??? and why he wanted lindsay, to get to know them??? horrible, how his father treated them...
i hope you update soon... great chapter, love it MEL=)
Date: 07/26/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
amazing job cant wait for more
Date: 07/26/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Iīm glad you have internet again!!!
wow...i mean, that song... (i heard it, while reading ;o))
he wrote it for lindsay... does it mean he loves her? i knew he loves her... he always said that... but he wrote HER a song, for me that is the ultimative proof of love...
AND now he wanted to record it WITH HER... i canīt believe, thatīs sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!
what does this mean? does it mean something? is it this "yeah i will always love you but i will still marry paige" or something else? man...donīt do this with me... my hope is growing... ^^ ;o)
i will never give up hoping and wishing that they will together someday... i know there the kids... but nevertheless... i wish that there comes a time, when they are together again... you give me hope that will happen again...
wow...andyīs dad is a BIG asshole!!!! i admire lindsay for her self-control... i think i had slapped him...more than once...for every bad word he said about his son!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
still love your story.... greetings...
Date: 07/25/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/23/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
i agree... we need an update ;)
Date: 07/23/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE.... the evening is sooooo boring without a new chapter of "what if".... ;o)
Date: 07/23/10 08:56 am Title: Chapter 10
cant wait for more
Date: 07/22/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
poor lindsay... i never thought, that she is so sad, because of the miscarriage...
and yes, i'm glad too, that paige gave them time to talk about everything... it was really important, that they have talked about their feelings... but that they would only kiss, i would not have thought ^^ but it's good how it is :D and i'm glad, that linds feel better now.... and what's going on now??? i want to know... now... :D
can we still have one last chapter for today??? MEL=)
