Date: 07/27/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter Nine
I really loved this chapter... especially the ending part with Brian and Amanda discussing seeing the Eagle the day before. You did a really "beautiful" job writing about what would have been such a touching experience :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the scene! It was a great one to write. I loved having Brian get Amanda the eagle from the gift shop. Brian's character in this story is gifted with an intuition about making memories to last a lifetime. It was a blessing getting to write such a wonderful version of Brian. Thank you for the reviews - I look forward to some more responses from you as you keep reading! :)
Date: 07/14/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter Nine
Great chap. Your writing is so descriptive. And I love the moments that Brian and Amanda had. Especially when talking about Nick.
Date: 07/14/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter Nine
Great chapter! I loved the description of Nick like a puppy who you have to ignore so as not to reinforce his behavior LOL. And the "burro boogies" part LOL - hilarious, and nice HP reference too! Have you done the burro ride in the Grand Canyon? That part was so detailed! Loving it!
Author's Response: I've never been to the Grand Canyon at all... lol I'm glad the detail/imagination was strong enough to mask that.. ;)
