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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/11 03:01 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm gonna kill Toby! Jeez! Fuck offm an & let them Byos be!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/11 03:00 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I'm gonna kill Toby! Jeez! Fuck offm an & let them Byos be!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I really thought they were going to have an enjoyable couple of days on the river, but I think Ben might be an asshole and try and ruin things.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oooh, Toby! This is starting to get really suspenseful!

Before that, though, I was gonna say, I think this is the funniest chapter yet! Nick trying to make pancakes on a grill... EPIC! LMFAO And I loved the references to Bellatrix Lestrange, Scuba Steve, and Pat the gym teacher lookalike LMAO. (Aside from the "better six pack / bigger balls" lines, I laughed cause my middle school gym teacher was named Pat LOL.)

Author's Response: I have had 3 gym teachers in my life - and ALL THREE OF THEM were named Pat. I think it might be a requirement for the profession. Glad you enjoyed the chapter... can't you totally picture Nick forgetting that the pancake stuff's gonna go through the grates? And the Bellatrix Lestrange reference was a last minute add-on that happened 'cos I couldn't think of how to describe that look that Bellatrix has - other than "electrocuted"! LOL

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