Date: 07/16/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oooh, Toby! This is starting to get really suspenseful!
Before that, though, I was gonna say, I think this is the funniest chapter yet! Nick trying to make pancakes on a grill... EPIC! LMFAO And I loved the references to Bellatrix Lestrange, Scuba Steve, and Pat the gym teacher lookalike LMAO. (Aside from the "better six pack / bigger balls" lines, I laughed cause my middle school gym teacher was named Pat LOL.)
Author's Response: I have had 3 gym teachers in my life - and ALL THREE OF THEM were named Pat. I think it might be a requirement for the profession. Glad you enjoyed the chapter... can't you totally picture Nick forgetting that the pancake stuff's gonna go through the grates? And the Bellatrix Lestrange reference was a last minute add-on that happened 'cos I couldn't think of how to describe that look that Bellatrix has - other than "electrocuted"! LOL