Date: 07/20/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
Omg. The Welcom Home, you line totally had me! You're killing me. His is so beautifully written. And Brian is such a great person for forgiving Amanda. I think it's believable because he's dying...why would he want to spendtime being mad like that?
Date: 07/20/10 12:29 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
Aww, you did it! You made me cry! The "Welcome home, you" line AND the fan encounter at the end. Nice job! I love a good tearjerker, but it still takes just the right touch to actually jerk the tears out of me LOL. I think Brian was right to forgive Amanda, though I'm surprised he did it so quickly. He's probably a lot better, more forgiving person than I am though LOL.
Author's Response: Brian couldn't stay mad forever...even if it was adorable!
Date: 07/20/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
I know exactly what you mean about seeing it in your head like a movie and it just pops onto the screen in word format. I used to have it, so I can envy you that you have it and are doing such a fabulous job :)
I love Brian. Have I said that before? I just love him so much in this story, and how serene he is about dying makes me want to cry. *sigh* Amanda ("whorebitch" in my head lol) better tell Nick ASAP. ASAP.
Anyway, carry on with the updating :P
Author's Response: It's a curse and a blessing having it in movie format...a blessing cos I can actually write it quickly and a curse because I never feel like I convey what I'm seeing right! Brian's serenity in the face of death is something that I envy about the character, that I wish I had in my own heart. I wish I was that assured in my own faith that I wouldn't fear death. It's a peaceful thing.