Date: 07/28/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six
Oh god *sobs* the thought of Brian in the hospital all frail like that is just so heartbreaking. But I'm glad he called Amanda.
Date: 07/28/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four
Good one Amanda, you tell the bastard!!
Date: 07/28/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
I knew he'd react like that!
Date: 07/28/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
Noooooooooooooo!! I knew it was coming but still hard to take!
Date: 07/28/10 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
OK, I saw the words "Mom, Pops" and decided I'll read this when I get home from work because I just kow it's going to be a sad chapter :(
Author's Response: aww.. yeah good call
Date: 07/28/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Kissing in the rain is sooo romantic!
Date: 07/28/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
I laughed at the drawing and Nick saying she needed a bigger piece of paper! But I know that the next bit will be sad, when Brian tells his family :(
Author's Response: lmfao... Nick and Amanda's drawings made me laugh when I was writing it
Date: 07/28/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
I knew she'd get found out sooner or later!
Date: 07/28/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
And they're both lying to him!
Date: 07/28/10 11:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Oh god, I hope she goes against her Dad. Telling that story would be just wrong!
Date: 07/28/10 10:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
Now he's got her phone, he's bound to find out. So glad Nick rescued Brian though, what a hero!
Date: 07/28/10 10:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
No fucking way would I do that bridge or bungee jump!!!
Date: 07/27/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter Nine
I really loved this chapter... especially the ending part with Brian and Amanda discussing seeing the Eagle the day before. You did a really "beautiful" job writing about what would have been such a touching experience :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the scene! It was a great one to write. I loved having Brian get Amanda the eagle from the gift shop. Brian's character in this story is gifted with an intuition about making memories to last a lifetime. It was a blessing getting to write such a wonderful version of Brian. Thank you for the reviews - I look forward to some more responses from you as you keep reading! :)
Date: 07/22/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh god, the tears have begun! When he told her, and her reaction...oh god, so heartbreaking. And that last line about him wanting to die living was just so heart wrenching.
Author's Response: I love that line. The scene you're reading was SOOOO hard to write!
Date: 07/22/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I really thought they were going to have an enjoyable couple of days on the river, but I think Ben might be an asshole and try and ruin things.
