Date: 07/16/10 10:53 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
You're making a miracle here, you're making me love Nick, even if I don't like him so much (only when he is "Frack")!
Poor Brian, in trouble with Leighanne!! And I have a feeling too that Amanda isn't true at all with the guys, those phone calls are really weird!
Can't wait for your next update and maybe there will be some hont about the big secret!
Date: 07/16/10 05:07 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Amanda! Ouch! I can't believe she would kiss him LOL. I'm loving all these updates!
Author's Response: I have another entire "stop" on their road trip already written. I had written everything up to it, but I lost all the connector updates that got them from Santa Fe to the next stop... lol So I have to rewrite it. It's good though because it gave me the chance to rethink something I was going to put into the next update that I've changed my mind on. ;) So there's going to be another massive update probably tomorrow.
Date: 07/16/10 04:24 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Her dad my ASS...SHE'S the one telling that scuzzy reporter where they are! If I'm wrong I'll be shocked. But nice, touching chapter. I love when real facts of events are thrown in.
Author's Response: I like throwing in real events. It adds a level of reality to the story.
Date: 07/16/10 03:19 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Wow loving all these updates! Never really thought that bad of Amanda so far but now she's definitely starting to seem pretty shady.
Date: 07/15/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
OMG she is a traitor!!!! since the first article posted about the trip I thought she was behind it but then she seemed so nice I was like naaah she cant do that to her boyfriend BUT she is!!! shame on her
Date: 07/15/10 09:51 pm Title: "Eye to the Skies: Backstreet Boys Soar Over New Mexico"
Oh Oh. Trouble on the way. This story is getting more and more interesting!
Date: 07/15/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Uh-oh... sounds like trouble is brewing! :) Can't wait to see what's in store next
Date: 07/15/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
You're killing me with the suspense! Totally enjoying this story though. I love the little moments, I know I've said that but I do. I like how you've written Nick and Brian. Oh and every place they go makes me want to go there. I drove I40 from Flagstaff to Nashville, TN and I loved New Mexico and this really made me want to see it again. Excited for what's next.
Date: 07/15/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Very beautiful, especially the romantic scene between Nick and Amanda. They make a very cute couple!!
Date: 07/15/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Aww, what are they going to be doing? lol.
Awesome updates. I love that you update so often :)
Date: 07/15/10 05:39 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Now I'm pretty sure about Brian...why Nick would be' jealous if he told Amamnda the truth?
I can't wait to read the rest, this is one of the best story I've read so far!!!!!
Date: 07/15/10 05:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven
AHHHHH!! You're killing me! We were so close to finding out what the hell is going on! damn you Nick, couldn't you shower any longer? haha
Author's Response: Well he could, but then he wouldn't smell so special. ;) haha
Date: 07/15/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Gah!!! I hate you LOL. I wanted him to tell her (and us) already! More soon! :)
Date: 07/15/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Ugh, you have to tell us what's going on here! lol I can't take it any longer. Please?
Author's Response: LOL.. but they're only half way to the second stop on the trip! There's so much still to be done! ;)
Date: 07/15/10 04:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I just wanted to say again how much I love this story. You write it so well, so please keep it up! By the way, I love Amanda, as far as original character girlfriends go, she's an awesome character and adds to the story rather than hurts it. :)
Author's Response: I'm really liking Amanda, too, which is funny cos I don't usually like the female characters I write. Even Claire gets on my nerves in some chapters of Time Watcher, but Amanda's actually got spunk or something. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're liking the story!
