Date: 12/15/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Three
Oh I so want her sister to die a slow painful death. She is lying for no reason. Jealous maybe? Either way I hope she goes to prison. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/04/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Two
Oh I so hate this bitch. She should go to jail for lying. I really hope Dork can cross examine her into the ground. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/04/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-One
Oh man I could feel the tension in the courtroom. He really did love her. Personally I think he will have to tell about the things he kept to himself. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/03/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty
OH HELL YES!!!! I can see Walters face. He must have been ready to burst a blood vessel. Oh this is really getting good. Keep it up.
Marguerite
Date: 12/03/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Nine
Oh I want to slap the asshole prosecutor for doing that. I so want to see the jury say not guilty. Then have Leon die. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/03/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Eight
Oh this does not look good. I hope his lawyer can spin it in his favor. Keep up the suspenseful work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/03/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Seven
Oh man this was so sad at first. then happy because he realized that no matter what he has people that love him. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 12/01/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Two
Please update. Love this story.
Date: 11/28/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Two
Please continue the hearing soon..I wanna know what happens next. It sounds like it doesn't goes that well for Nick and we don't want that to happen.
Date: 11/21/10 10:30 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Two
this is probably the most nail-biting trial i've ever read about......
Date: 11/18/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty-Two
These last chapters were really well written, seems almost real. Thanks for the update!
Date: 11/18/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Ohhh, Krystal makes me SO mad...lol. Great story so far, that's what the villain of the story is supposed to do!! :) haha
Date: 11/17/10 05:15 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty
this story is developing so nicely, i pretty much wait for an update. keep going!
Date: 11/15/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighty
Omg!! This was so epic! So well written. I hope this was enough. Can't wait for more!
Date: 11/15/10 08:31 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Nine
See...this is why I HATE laywers. They don't get a full answer...they get what they want then cut you off. Poor Nick. I know he feels helpless right now. Come ON Dirk..help the guy out!! GAH!!! Write faster! lmao! I need to know what happens!