Date: 11/14/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Eight
How freakin intense! But, I think Dirk firmly placed some doubt in jury's mind about the tire tracks. Go Dirk! I knew I was gonna love reading about this trial! You're writing it beautifully!
Date: 11/14/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Eight
Wow, this was great. Love all the detail with that one witness. You really captured the feeling of being in a courtroon (not that I've ever been in one) lol. But you made me feel like I was there. Update soon please!
Date: 11/14/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Seven
eeeeeeeeekkkkk (again LOL) guurl, thanks for the awesome updates!! Noisy girl is way happy now :-P
Date: 11/14/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Six
eeeekkk!!! This Noisy Girl is REALLY happy right now! *clicks Next*
Date: 11/13/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Seven
And....its here. Nick does not fully understand just how instrumental he is in each and every one of his friends lives. He is very loved and cared for. And each and ever fan that believes in him. God, I sound like this is real!! The way you write it makes it FEEL real. I can't wait till they see his drawings. I'm with Sel..this does feel like a movie. It would make a GREAT movie!
Date: 11/13/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Seven
I swear, this is like a movie! The suspense is great and I can picture what you write. The ending was really sweet. I'm so glad hat he has the guys and that they've been there for him through all this. Dying to see what'll happen...
Date: 11/13/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Seven
He just has to get out of that place he just HAS to. Poor Nick I can't even imagine what he must be feeling and how scared he must be. And he's right no matter what happens he'll always have his brothers and Zoe and Kayla. Hopefully this story will have a somewhat happy ending and Nick will get to go home, I know it's only a story but I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him.
Date: 11/13/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Six
Aww man this was sad. I really want him to be set free. However getting back to his life will take a lot. Leon is still out there, still don't know who scared off his first lawyer, he doesn't know about Kayla so he has a lot to deal with. Keep up the excellent work. Best story out there.
Marguerite
Date: 11/13/10 11:46 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Six
I nearly fell over when I saw the email that this had been updated! :P Hopefully the muse decides to stick around for a while longer.
Date: 11/13/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Six
Th end is near....omg what's the outcome. Don't let us waiting here :P
Date: 11/13/10 08:50 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Six
"Shut the hell up Howard."...:roll: Loved that part!
I knew if enough of us Noisy Girls bugged you enough you'd update this! lmao!! It worked! *dances all around*
The suspense is KILLING MEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! I need to know what's goin on in that head of yours. Must. know. if. Nick. is. set. freeeeeeee!!!!!! And, if he is, what Leon plans to do! How will AJ react to Kayla and Nick together? Sooo many questions! I need answers!!
lol! Dramatic much am I? hehe..
Date: 10/27/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Five
Still 10 hours to go? Pff hurry up, We need Nick out of jail, now! haha...
Date: 10/26/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Five
Great chap! And as sad as it is...Leighanne is absolutely right.
Date: 10/26/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Five
"He's my brother, my son, my best friend... I loved this part , cant wait for the trail... update soooon
Date: 10/26/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventy-Five
Now that made me think. It is a very weird coincidence that they are all connected. Oh lady what things are you planning in that brain of yours. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LOL It occurred to me the other day that nobody had picked up on the connections I was trying to make so I finally had to make someone say it. :)
