Date: 07/25/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like your story. Poor Nick. He fell in love Ashton. I wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it.
Date: 07/25/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
With the way they are acting towords each other I am very surprised they ever got together. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks. There is a thin line between love and hate.
Date: 07/25/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh I am glad she gets to see everyone. She seems to be wasting away in Kentucky. Hopefully she will get better in Florida. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Florida is good for her.
Date: 07/24/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 7
YAY!! I read everything and let me say: lets the real story begins!!
Poor Ashie... now we can see Nick stupid early times... he already made her suffer at that time... you see how love and hate are twins!
Author's Response: I'm excited to start writing the teenage, hormonal drama of Nick and Ashton. Now that we know a little bit of Ashton's life..we can bring her closer to Nick. It's gonna be a roller coaster ride!!!!
Date: 07/23/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Kevin is right Nick is being a hormonal teenager. But I thought it was cute when he sang to her. Funny how things start out. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/23/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
AJ was cute when he kissed her. But I laughed when she said it felt like kissing her brother. Ah young love between her and Nick. I bet she reads her journal years later and laughs. The love of her life was her biggest pain in the butt. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Isn't young love grand. It reminds me of when I was in middle school and high school.
Date: 07/23/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really likes this. She reminds me of myself at that age. A bit insecure and wanting to fit in with the popular crowd. You can tell Nick likes her because of the way he picks on her. That's what they do. keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/23/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool!! The very first date you used is the day my daughter was born!! That's how I know how long BSB has been together...lol...She was born 3 days after BSB was!! hehe....Great start!!!
Author's Response: That's so cool.
Date: 07/22/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ah that was sweet of AJ to take her. Things like that are very important. Keep up the awesome work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: AJ is a sweetheart.
Date: 07/22/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah to have a normal life. At least she gets a bit of that for awhile. Then comes Nick. This will be very interesting. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks. The beginning doesn't have a lot about Nick. I"m trying to build background and show how their lives merged together. I want it to be realistic.
Date: 07/22/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is so cute. He is rude to her but that usually means they like you. Oh I can see the teenage drama already. And when they discover they have feelings for each other. Hormones will cause trouble. Awesome new story keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/22/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I think its great that you are doing this story. It will be good to find out how things got started. its so cute that riley and brian are close. Black hair and green eyes...dat means she is a knock out cuz she looks like kevin. We all know how sexy kevin is!
Date: 07/22/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh Nicky... you will fall for her.... literally! I don't know why! lol
Great to know how they meet, their dreams... everything!
Author's Response: This is going to be a fun story to write.
