Date: 10/14/10 03:13 am Title: I See Something Shiny!
Ooo…what’s that? I see something shiny!
A.D.D. much AJ? but knowing AJ it can't be good with the situation they're in.
Author's Response: LMAO...yeah...he gets off track easy, doesn't he? But you gotta love him! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Terri!
Date: 10/14/10 12:54 am Title: I See Something Shiny!
“forget it…you ain’t in no damn position to judge!”
---Our lill camper isn't that glad... mmmm
“Maybe that was harsh. I’m not really that shallow, ok? But you gotta understand…
*SLAP* “Jerk!” Yeah…I deserved that. I’m not even gonna deny it…it’d be a waste of my breath. But that shit stung like a bitch!’’
---I always laugh with his moments... he aren't that lucky.
“I was SO done dealing with them. Screw ‘em…well…not literally, of course.”
---OF COURSE! Imagine....
“Time to head back to the base camp, I guess. Between the walking, the smoke, talking to myself like a fuckin’ nut case and the whole beach environment has calmed me a fair bit…so I suppose I should apologize, to the girls.
Ooo…what’s that? I see something shiny!”
---Always blame the lack of cigarettes. I bet that scene was hilarious to write!
Shine... shine lill star....
Author's Response: I know you love AJ as much as I do...and I'm so glad you are liking how I've chosen to portray him in this story. I'm finding it so much fun! Thanks for your reviews...you know I love them!
Date: 10/14/10 12:30 am Title: I See Something Shiny!
Trust Howie to always be the peacemaker, lol. Poor AJ, I kinda feel bad for him for being under so much stress. But I also want to slap him.. so good on Kris for that one!! The part about Kevin made me feel kinda sad, partly cause I think it might be true, he probably has not talked to them very much.
Can't wait for the next chap.. I want to know what the shiny thing is! :) I love how you write AJ! It is awesome!
Author's Response: Aw Steph! Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoy the story...you know I love writing AJ...he's so much fun...plus you can twist his personality around however you want and it pretty much always sounds good. LOL. I LOVE YA AJ! :-) And yeah...I saw a tweet to Kevin where AJ said he needed to meet Rochelle. It's so sad that they've all kinda drifted apart from him.
Date: 10/07/10 10:35 am Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
Damn AJ and Kristal's little bickering definately reminds me of something. lol. Seriously. altho I can't believe he is so mean to her. haha
Author's Response: Really? Hm. I wonder what it could remind you of. LMFAO. Bickering is fun to write! I'm having a blast with this, so far! ;-) Thanks again, for reading and for all the feedback, Erika!
Date: 10/07/10 10:22 am Title: One Messed Up Chick
OMG LMFAO...seriously AJ?!?! I can't believe he did that. Shit had me crackin up. What a damn moron.
Author's Response: :-) Couldn't you see it happening though? I mean really? For some reason, I wouldn't be surprised! Ha!
Date: 10/07/10 10:14 am Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
Damn migraines!!! Dude AJ is definately a sailor.
Author's Response: I know! Those migraines are everywhere I go, huh? Even in the fictional world, I can't escape them. LOL. I'm so glad you decided to read this and that you're enjoying it. Thank you for all the reviews, too!
Date: 10/07/10 10:03 am Title: My Rather Puny Fish
Hehehe...the vision of HOwie and his little fish is hilarious...even more when he wants to slap AJ with it. Them two are going at it...I'm rooting for...hmmmm...I'm not sure.
Author's Response: It's a tough call, huh? Who WOULD you be rooting for? O_o
Date: 10/07/10 09:53 am Title: Rules To Survival
Oh lord...Kristal is a whiner!! She's on my nerves already. lol. Are you sure that's not Jack? Or his twin?
Author's Response: Well at least I know Kris is a pretty accurate interpretation of me, if she's getting on your nerves. LMFAO! I annoy you SO bad sometimes! :-P
Date: 10/07/10 09:47 am Title: Not All It's Cracked Up To Be
Hey I say that a lot "Fuck me beautiful" LOL!!! I love AJ already. He's got my potty mouth and he's already bickering with Kristal...hmmmm...sounds familiar.
Author's Response: LMFAO! <----That's all I can say!
Date: 10/03/10 04:29 pm Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
LOL! I love AJ in this story, love love love! He is so hilarious. Basic guide to women...ha! AJ should write a book. A book of hilarious lists. I'd buy it. Still loving the banter between him and Kris.. still hoping for a passionate realization between them that they are madly in love =P And of course still loving this story. Great work Kristal!
Author's Response: You are such a hopeless romantic, Steph...always wanting someone to hook up. LOL. I'm really glad you are liking the elements of the story though! Thank you for the nice reviews, you know I love 'em!
Date: 10/02/10 05:19 am Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
Dear Lord! The rest of them have come to terms with the fact they're stranded but AJ's being a big, whiney bitch about it all. I think you got him down.
Author's Response: HAHA! "whiny bitch" Not AJ! Never!
Date: 10/02/10 04:48 am Title: How We Got In This Damn Situation
I love AJ in this already. I wonder if he's Jack's twin...the softer one. lol.
Is it bad that I love how much he cusses...I'm off to the next chap
Author's Response: I know you would get a kick out of AJ! He kinda reminds me of you. LMFAO!
Date: 10/01/10 11:35 pm Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
''Now I have a black eye and a bite mark on my arm.
“Excuse you?!? What did you just call me? Say it again…go ahead.” Ha! Yeah right, cutie…I’m smarter than that. Women are not creatures to mess with, let me tell ya. I’ve learned that the hard way.'' - - I would do that too.. must say it.
''As a matter of fact…here you go. AJ McLeans basic guide rules to women are as follows…'' - - This is interesting...
''4…Women never…and I mean fuckin’ NEVER let you forget the shit you say or do. Five years from now…if I still know her…cutie will bring up this damn incident as some kind of damn proof, for whatever fuckin’ point she’s trying to make, at that moment.'' - - He thinks that they will.. well... the vision of D and Resa... they will!
''5… “Nothing” is seriously the most dangerous word, in the female language. It never…EVER…means “nothing”. If a woman ever answers you with this word…high tail your fuckin’ ass outta there as fast as humanly possible! Because “Nothing” leads to a loud sigh…then to “fine”…and back around to “whatever”.'' - - end of the road!
hahhah those rules are soooo perfect and imagine he saying all this.... hahahah
''You know…I’ve come to realize, over the years…the cute ones are always lesbian, married, or fuckin’ crazy! This one…is fuckin’ CRAZY!'' No comment!
Oh Kris... NEXT!
Author's Response: Oh Gabby! You make me laugh with these reviews! I'm thrilled that you are liking the story so much! AJ's so much fun to write, in this one. He thinks he knows so much, yet he doesn't seem to abide by all of his own guidelines. He's so funny! Thank you for reading and leaving such great feedback!
Date: 10/01/10 10:56 pm Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
OMG! That was hilarious!! Loved that list. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad you enjoyed it. AJ's lists are a ton of fun, to come up with. He's going to be a fun character to work with! Thank you for reading and reviewing Krys!
Date: 10/01/10 08:59 pm Title: Basic Guide Rules To Women
LMAO! AJ is a smart man...why can't he learn to keep his mouth shut? Honestly! But noooo...he's got to be a pain in the ass and in the long run...just gonna make things worse. UGH...MEN! As for mr dorugh and miss lambe...woohoo...i like that sound. can i have a dream like that? better yet, can i gett married in real life? anyhowie...what can i say other than....IT WAS THE BOMB! Okay, I'm loving it and i want more...are you done yet...are you...please...with aj on top?
Author's Response: LMAO. Excited much? You got two chapters in the same week...aren't I moving fast enough? Geesh! And I thought I got pushy about updates. LOL. You know I love your feedback, thank you!
