Date: 09/30/10 03:38 am Title: One Messed Up Chick
OMG! I just love this story to death Kristal! Give a smartass attitude get one back.
Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying it! I really appreciate the feedback.
Date: 09/30/10 01:16 am Title: One Messed Up Chick
''7…did I mention that it rained? Because it did. A LOT.'' Downpour isn't funny, but this was!
''And why…oh why…had I previously claimed him as my favorite Boy, in the group? Screw it…I’m switching to Nick.'' hahah if Carter would be the one there you would claim Littrell as the fav!
''Crossing my arms over my chest, and sticking my hip out, I stood there with a very amused look on my face until…
*SMACK*
“SON OF A FUCKING BITCH…DAMN SHIT FUCKING HIT MY DAMN EYE…MOTHER FUCKER! OW! DAMN IT!” The grown man clutched his right eye as his knees buckled, sending him into the sand.
“Now who’s the idiot?” AHAHAHHAHAHA TAKE IT, MISTER! HAHAHAHA Now who's the master in stupid moves?
“Wow. For such a bad ass attitude…it doesn’t take much to bring you to your knees, huh? Quit being a baby and let me look at it, already.”
“Bit me.”
“I don’t see how biting you is gonna help…but okay…” Down to the knees, mister.... let me be the one to bite him??? Tell me yes!!! TELL ME!!!!!!
Kris, this is getting better by the minute! Poor Howie.... GO CUTIE!
Author's Response: LMFAO! I love the review Gabby! Hopefully you will like the new chapter just as much! Thank you for sticking with the story, I'm thrilled that you are liking it so much!
Date: 09/29/10 11:37 pm Title: One Messed Up Chick
LMFAO! Way to go AJ, was a brilliant idea, demonstrating how he hurt Howie. Hahaha. I also enjoyed the part about the broken Backstreet Boys cd that she found. Very cute. I very much enjoy Kris and AJs relationship in this, bickering but they can get along when they need to. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I know, right? That wasn't exactly a smart idea for him, was it? I'm so happy you've liked it, this far, though. Thank you for reading and leaving me feedback, Steph!
Date: 09/29/10 08:32 pm Title: One Messed Up Chick
Oh MY FLIPPIN GOODNESS! I GOT TEARS IN MY EYES! Holy shit hon, this is just damn funny! It's so...just....I can't even think straight. I know I heard what's going to happen, but reading it through, it just makes it even more funnier and...oh my side hurts! I just...I totally love everyone. And than AJ...what a damn dumb numb nut...really, you're going to try it again? Geez. *dances around* and yay, I get another chapter soon...woohoo!
Author's Response: LMAO! I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much! ;-) Thank you for reading, Resa, I've been loving your reviews!
Date: 09/29/10 07:38 pm Title: One Messed Up Chick
LOL... great chapter.
Author's Response: Aaaw! Thank you.
Date: 09/23/10 04:01 am Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
Oh man, I hope Kris is okay. And I agree with AJ, it would be totally weird to hear someone call you by your full name who you hardly even know. I just noticed your chapter names for this by the way - My Rather Puny Fish - ha! I love them. This story is great - definitely adding it to my favs!
Author's Response: Aaaaw! I'm so happy you're liking it enough to add on your favorites! I really needed a change from the drama of LATB and I'm having so much fun with the comedic adventure plot. So it should just continue to get funnier. Who knows what this group will get themselves into. LOL
Date: 09/23/10 03:57 am Title: My Rather Puny Fish
Oh man, that was low of Howie! Jeez. I mean I get that they are both pissed off but still. AJ really does need to respect the women in this story more.
Author's Response: Yeah...Howie really did hit below the belt, with that one, didn't he? Those Latin tempers might get these two in a fair bit of trouble in this story. Hopefully they won't kill each other, though. LOL. However, maybe AJ needs a good smack on the head so he'll find his manners again. :-) Thanks for all the nice reviews Steph!
Date: 09/23/10 03:52 am Title: Rules To Survival
LMAO I love AJ's survival rules. And aww he's not a total ass the whole time, he did feel kinda bad about it.. and now they have reached some kind of truce, that's good. Maybe AJ will continue to feel bad for Kris and they won't argue so much anymore? I hope she's okay since he mentioned it looked like she was in pain. Also Howie was totally adorable being all excited about his fish. Love it!!
Author's Response: AJ is a hoot, isn't he? Maybe he and Kris will start getting along more...but maybe their personalities just clash? You do gotta be proud of Howie and his prized fish, though. What a cutie! LOL.
Date: 09/23/10 03:46 am Title: Not All It's Cracked Up To Be
Oh yay they found shore! And do I sense some sort of romance ahead for Howie and Resa? I guess I will have to read and see ;) Also LOL at AJ and Kris... I can tell they will be entertaining for all.
Author's Response: Hmmm....you might just be sensing a little sumthin sumthin between Howie and Resa...you WILL have to keep reading, to find out. LOL. I'm so glad you're liking the story Steph. Thanks, again, for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/23/10 03:36 am Title: How We Got In This Damn Situation
Hey Kristal! I found it! I love AJ's narration in this. I think you capture him so well and I could totally see him being this bitchy if he were on a raft in the middle of the ocean. But then again who wouldn't be? I love the circus freak comment!
Author's Response: Aw Steph! One of my most favorite readers. I always love the feedback you leave for me. I'm so excited that you started reading this and I hope that it will keep your interest.
Date: 09/17/10 01:09 pm Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
great chapter. poor Kris. hope she's okay. are those people crazy for leaving?! lol... can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. You'll find out more about Kris in the new chapter. And those people really ARE nuts. LOL
Date: 09/17/10 05:22 am Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
I can't wait to find out what's going on with Kris and as for AJ's ass, he needs to start remembering his manners LOL. Update soon lady!
Author's Response: Yeah...it seems his manners went down with the ship, huh? We all know his mama taught him better. But maybe he'll start being nicer, soon. Thanks for reading, Terri!
Date: 09/17/10 05:15 am Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
''I can hear my mother’s voice now…“See? Now don’t you feel bad for acting like you have, toward her?” I can see MY mom saying this....
Always a pleasure to read this and comment. Alex is a great character full of layers!
GO ON, GIRL!
Poor cutie....
Author's Response: Yay! Gabby liked the chapter! Thank you for reading and leaving me such nice feedback. I can see my mom saying that, too. And you know Denise would be on his rear end, if she was there!
Date: 09/17/10 04:44 am Title: What-The-Hell-Ever
Oh hell! THAT WAS ME YELLING AT THEM! Man...can I smack aj? Because...hes gotta be....nah...on second thought, I love it all! YOUR THE BEST! It is turning into a killer story hon. You've done a great job!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm so...SO...happy that you are enjoying it. I'm having a ton of fun writing it and coming up with ideas. Thanks for the review, too. *MUAH*
Date: 09/14/10 01:18 pm Title: My Rather Puny Fish
this is so good. i'm really enjoying. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're liking it. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Krys!
