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Reviewer: Rainbowbrite006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/13 04:20 pm Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

Loved this! So damn funny. :)

Reviewer: PaigesKaos Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 01:46 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

Adorable.  I laughed out loud. Everytime I see the subway commercial from now on, i will laugh.



Author's Response: haahahaa.. glad to have corrupted the foot long song for ya! ;)

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 12:23 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

Pengi that was AWESOME! you had the boys down to a T (well, the boys i envision at least, dont know the real deal lol). and it's so typical of aj and nick to dare each other, i think we've witnessed a couple of those on vids. and AJ always reacts the most to the dares like it's the most difficult thing EVER.

and Howie with his scoffing and not joining in. he's smart, that one. and Brian not participating but ENJOYING the stupid. this was awesome! thanks for writing it!!



Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) I picture the Boys the same way... lol And OMG yes, AJ is a total drama queen, he's ridiculous... LOL

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 03:16 pm Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

See this is why I love your writing. I laughed so hard at this. I even showed it to a couple of my co workers and had them laughing. Traveling with them would be so awesome. Keep up the great work. Hey you could turn this into a series. Life on the BSB bus.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Hahaha.. I can't believe you showed people this. I'm glad you liked it! It was for a challenge posted on the forum, I dunno if I'd ever do a series with it, though. I'm sure many more snapshots of the Boys on the bus will show up throughout my stories, though... lol I like imagining them bickering. Like a producer/writer for the TV show "Friends" once said, I feel like my best scenes are when all the characters are grouped together in one long scene and all the drama plays out in their dialogue... LOL

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 07:26 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

I really enjoyed that! I loved the bet and the way Nick was faking it, lol.

Author's Response: I loved that AJ knew and let him keep faking it. lmfao

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:36 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

LMFAO. I'm laughing so hard that I can't write a decent review, this is too fucking funny.

Author's Response: YAY!! lmao

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:32 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

Nick was too funny yelling out that he didn't do it. It was like instinct. I also found the tire dares really amusing, I'd have been laughing right alongside Bri.



Author's Response: lmao.. poor Nick.... but he earned having the rep. it usually IS his fault. LOL

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 12:30 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

lol I think this was best one yet, I could so see Nick and AJ doing that.



Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 12:22 am Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

Omg! That was so freakin funny. Loved the whole Five Dolla Footlong parts! And dramatic AJ of course. Great job...this had me rolling.

Author's Response: lmao... AJ's a drama llama. And the five dolla footlong thing has been stuck in my head for months, LOL... I actually had the first part up to the nazi zombie bitches lines written waiting for inspiration for a story in which that scene would fit. LOL

Reviewer: evergreenwriter83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 11:39 pm Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

A story after my own heart! I absolutely LOVED it! Great job Pengi :)

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 11:20 pm Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

LOL cute story! Thanks for doing the challenge.



Author's Response: I had fun writing it, LOL It all started with the five dolla thing... LOL I think thats why I had to start and end with it.. :P Thanks for the review

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/10 10:57 pm Title: Antics of a Broken Down Bus

lol!



Author's Response: lmfao.... Glad you laughed!