Date: 08/13/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 2
lol can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/13/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
He needs to get it back.
Date: 08/13/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my lord. This made me laugh so much. And I can see Brian and Nick bitching at Howie for the rest of his life. At least they are ok. And how does Brian think Nick has a bony ass??? Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: lol recently he totally does... theres no meat left! he's dieted it all off! :P
Date: 08/13/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2
I laughed throughout the entire chapter. I feel bad though because I laughed at them crashing. If I was Brian or Nick I'd beat Howie's ass.
Favorite line: "It says right on them to put it on yourself before a baby!" I cried. I LOVE Brian.
Author's Response: lmfao...I loved the whole fight over the mask. I can picture Brian and Nick clawing at each other like girls, the mask hanging there between them as they go at it.. lmao
Date: 08/12/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol Nick and his fear of llamas!
Loved Howie having to buckle Brian in and almost Nick lol
Author's Response: lmao ... Howie shouldda listened to them. *shakes head*
Date: 08/12/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Howie having to buckle Brian in was too funny.
Author's Response: lmao i can picture it... poor brian freakin out.. howie "SIT DOWWWWWN BEEYOTCH!" lmao
Date: 08/12/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
howie sounds like kev lol
Author's Response: lmfao he does.
Date: 08/12/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is hilarious! The beginning is funny and makes me wonder why he hates llamas so much. Lol. And love the Nizzle love going on. I can totally see stuff like that going down. Haha
Author's Response: The intro paragraph is one of my favorite paragraphs I've ever written from Nick's POV because it's so bizarrely twisted, yet so something I can picture him saying. Especially the sheep + giraffe = llama bit. LMAO Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 08/12/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh lady you so have an amazing writing talent. I can imagine them acting like this when bored and Howie being like this. Taking Kevin's place as daddy. Traveling with them would be such a blast. I can't wait to read more.
Marguerite
Author's Response: ha ha ha... well.. It's about to take a strange turn, so prepare, I guess? lol Thanks for the review!