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Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg poor larry :( 

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww poor Larry! I'm glad he was the one that was eaten though! LOL great job! Perfect length for  short story! Thanks for doing the challenge :O)



Author's Response:

Thank you :) and your welcome it was fun.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Scary stuff!

Author's Response:

Bad scary or good scary? did you like it?