Date: 08/23/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thank God Mike took Aaron down!!!!! Serves that good for ntohing Bastard of a Carter right!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Jane rots in Hell too!!!!!!
Brooke BETTER be alright!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (though, she hasta be since she's in the Coaster Girl series-lol)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Aw, dang. I hafta put my pointy sticks away now & send the TMNT home....well, maybe I won't send them back just yet....hehe. ;)
Author's Response: lol good call on the whole Brooke thing! haha ...Don't send Donatello too far. He was always me favorite TMNT :)
Date: 08/23/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
how can you build up so much tension and expect us to wait for an update?!?!?!?!.....J/K....great job so far, cant wait for an update!
Author's Response: LoL because I love you all?
Date: 08/23/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 15
GOOD! AARON'S DEAD! Poor Brooke, how will she ever recover from such an ordeal?? :( Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: ::throws confetti:: lol...I didn't drag it on another chapter--woohoo!
Date: 08/23/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jeez...this is killing me. On to the next one...
Date: 08/23/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 15
I know it is really bad to be happy for someone to get killed but oh well that life. Really Really love Mike he so should get a medal for what he did dont think anyone gonna blame him though well part from Jane.
I think Nick should be the one to tell Jane about Aaron, maybe if she told them the turth things may be different but we will never know. Jane is so not going to see any of her four grankids LOVES IT
Author's Response: Yeah Jane's cut off from the grandkids...of course she'll be spending some time behind bars for lying to the FBI!
Date: 08/23/10 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, come on! you can't leave it like that!
Yay for Mike for killing A-hole! :)
Yeah, I woulda liked a slow * painful, death, but i understand his reasoning for the kill-shot...
OMG, poor brookie, she can't die.... SHE CAN'T, you here me? hehehehe
MORE!!!!
Author's Response: LoL that wouldn't really work well considering my NEXT story so I'll keep that in mind!
Date: 08/23/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
OMG thanks god aaron so death .... sad that he doesn't had to suffer :( he would have deserved it lol
no quick an ambulance and medis for lil brooke :) awww she is safe thanks god:D
next one pleeeeeeease :D
Author's Response: Yeah he would have deserved it but I think Brooke needed the help more. :)
Date: 08/23/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
Another cliffie, damn you're making me nervous here.
Thanks to Mike Aaron is taken down.
Author's Response: Nervous? Really? ::insert evil laugh here:: Mike's the MAN! Besides Kevin...because well...you just have to feel bad for Kev, lol
Date: 08/23/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh god let her be ok please she has to be ok a mike u did the right thing
Date: 08/23/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 15
AAAhhhh you can't end it like that!!! (even though you did haha) Ill be having mini heart attacks until you post the next update haha!!
I'd love to see Aaron come back from the dead this time. And poor poor little Brooke. At least she got to realise her daddy was there. I actually cant wait for the next update!! lol
Author's Response: Yup I did! :) psst...Aaron ain't coming back from the dead THIS time. That WOULD be incredible though...
Date: 08/23/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg stop ending it like that hehe. So can't wait for more.
Date: 08/23/10 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
YES! Go Mike! That was a slick move he made and good riddance Aaron deserved to die. I just hope Brooke is okay. But now Nick and Liv can breathe a little easier knowing she's alive and safe. I wanna know what happens, update soon!
Date: 08/23/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 15
FREAKING UPDATE! I was out of guard! LORD! I TOLD YOU LILL FOOD OF RAT YOU WEREN'T LIVE TO TELL??? OOOOHHH POOR BROOKE!!!! aWWWWW... I could see the scene... Carter on his knees holding her... oh LORD!!!! LIVVY!!!!! I think she will catch a flight till the end of the world to hold her baby!
LORD!
I LOVE YOU MIKE!
Date: 08/23/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh lord I knew it would be Aaron that died. He was shown mercy. He doesn't have to go back to prison. I hope however that Jane rots in there then in hell. I so hope Brook is ok. Poor baby. I think she will need therapy after all of this. Keep up the awesome work.
MArguerite
Date: 08/23/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank God for Mike and the kill shot!!!! WHHHHHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
