Date: 08/23/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
UH! YOU STOPPED! Am I gonna have to send Adam the angry attack llama after you? lol.
Author's Response: haha I left another mini-cliffy. You'll just have to wait until tonight. Until then I will spray anti-llama guard on myself and hide!
Date: 08/23/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh please tell me Mike doesn't die. He is a good man. And Kevin getting sliced & diced?? WOW!! He is a loyal friend. Nick better know how blessed he is to have brothers like that since his own blood brother is a psychopath. And his own mother isn't any better. How could she do that to her own son is beyond me. Please update soon. Excellent work.
I will be very sad to see this series end.
MArguerite
Author's Response: Thanks Marguerite! In response to your previous comment, Aaron is SO totally past the point of redemption. I have a mid-afternoon update coming shortly for all of you waiting on the edges of your seats, whether at work, school, or home. LoL
Date: 08/23/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my lord. Aaron really is out of his mind. I can see not wanting to go back to prison but to hurt his own flesh and blood is too weird. I was hoping there might be some redemption but I think it is too late now. I hope they find Brook. Awesome update.
Marguerite
Date: 08/23/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
FUCKING NO!!! MY POOR KEVIN! ARE YOU CRAZY??? LORD ADDIE WILL HAVE ATHING OVER ALL OF THEM!!!! JESUS! HE IS MY PERSONAL HERO HERE TOO, WITH THAT! Oh leave it to AJ and Howie....
JESUS!!! I love Mike!!! You are the best grandpa ever! Jesus! He said lill rat for Brooke?? YOU ARE THE DEAD RAT HERE LILL SHIT OF RAT!
Author's Response: I thought you would enjoy the rat reference...having Aaron say it makes it even more maddening though!
Date: 08/23/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
OUUUUCCCHHHH!!! Poor Kevin.....Nick is going to be in debt to Kevin for life!!!!
Author's Response: Oh Nick is in BIG debt...Kevin just didn't take a scratch for that man, lol
Date: 08/23/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
Thank God someone has some brains. Good thing Mike is....well, Mike! Thanks for putting something in there about Jane. Dumbshit's gotta finally get what's coming to her too! And poor Kevin, can I get an "OUCHHH!" :o)
Author's Response: You can get a super loud OUCH! haha. I couldn't have Jane get away unscathed...the lady has erked my last pen :)
Date: 08/23/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
ow owh.....
Go Mike, get Brook out of there! But if Mike can't do it, I hope Nick shows up before it's too late.
Thanks for the updates!
Date: 08/23/10 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 14
Mike is a good man and Nick he won't last much longer. I just hope this is over soon, very soon. Brooke needs medical attention badly and why the heck would he take his daughter? That little girl never did anything to him.
Date: 08/23/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oye vey in a half shell. Poor Kevin!!!!!!! I'd a feeling AC had shot his balls! God! That hasta be wicked painful!
*hides in the shadows with TMNT & my pointy sticks* Careful there Aaron. Mike has back-up you're unaware of. We's be ninja & ninja are VERY sneaky!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Stabbed...but either way that's pretty well (OUCH!) Seriously Ninjas rock my socks...Mike's in good hands!
Date: 08/23/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
oWay to go mike uggg I can't believe aaron. Mike I hope the fbi . Aaron I hope u enjoy the heat I'm sure satan will love to have u oh in jail they don't like people who hurt kids!
Date: 08/23/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG! I knew, I KNEW Mike would find them. Aaron better not hurt Brookie, or I'ma come after him wiff my uncles tools... i think a slow & painful death if definately in order here....
And WOOHOO for catching Jane.
Aw, poor Kev... aw, there's always adoption if they want more :)
As always, awesome chapter... where's the next one?
:::taps foot impatiently as i sit on the edge of my chair:::
I'm WAITING....
Author's Response: Yeah Henry only did ONE thing right this whole time and that was catching Jane...is everyone impressed? LoL Yeah Kev gets my hero medal in this one. He took one for the team...the WHOLE team. :) I think I'm going to do 3 updates on this one today...maybe I'll have the next chappy by lunch...
Date: 08/23/10 11:42 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow u sure know how to end a chapter in a way that keeps us dying for more!
Author's Response: I'm a sucker for cliffhangers...::ducks as everyone comes at me with torches::
Date: 08/23/10 11:33 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg I hope she makes it out alive. Can't wait for more amazing job.
Date: 08/23/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 14
woohoo Mike found her i know i love him for a reason, just hope northing will happend to him. It is also gr8 they got Jane to
lol AJ comment about it Kevin
Author's Response: I love Mike too...he'd be such a cool stepfather to have! Got to love how AJ puts things 'delicately!'
Date: 08/23/10 10:05 am Title: Chapter 13
Ohh such a great story again.
You cannot leave me with this cliffhanger ;)
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffy, lol. I have a knack for those...
