Date: 08/22/10 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh Kevin was so close hope someone follow the little rat face. im sorry Aaron but u messed with a little girl father that one person u cant mess come 2 think of it im not sorry.
Date: 08/22/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
ohhhhhhh not Kevin!!!!! Damnit Aaron.......
Date: 08/22/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit I hope they get to her in time. Poor baby needs her parents and a doctor. Now I am on the edge of my seat waiting to read the next chapter.
Marguerite
Author's Response: That means I should WRITE the next chapter right? LoL
Date: 08/22/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
You don't give me another way, so I have to Caps Locking it! In memory of Aaron.
Date: 08/22/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMFG .... NOW I WILL KILL AARON ... IF HE REALLY HURTS BROOKE THEN ...... HE IS A DEAD MAN AND BELIEVE HE WILL DIE VERY SLOWLY AND BEFORE HE DIES HE WILL EAT HIS SMALL FREAKING WHITE BALLS .....
great chapter :D I need more, please :D
Date: 08/22/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG NO! No, no, no...
:::looks around for uncles *sharp* hunting kniffe:::
Aaron, oh Aaron... come out, come out, wherever you are!
Author's Response: LoL did Aaron make you mad? :)
Date: 08/22/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
Holy crap! Kevin almost had him!! UGH!
Author's Response: Almost! Poor Kev...wait did I just say that out loud? LoL
Date: 08/22/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
FUCK! HOW DARE YOU TO HURT KEVIN LIKE THAT, YOUR LILL PIECE OF SHIT! HOW????
OHHH I WILL GIVE YOU TO THE RATS, MISTER!
Kevin is sneaky.... like Mas.. but here it's another thing.. I will have to.. GRRRRRRRR
Now Nick will HAVE to run after this thing...
Author's Response: Uh oh it's another post where you're CAPS LOCKING! ::grin::
Date: 08/22/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ohhhhhhhhh shit!!! I knew it wasn't gonna be that easy! God I hope one of the others follow him! And that Kevin is alright! Dear God this story is just...UGH!!!!! I wanna scream!!
Author's Response: It's okay, go ahead and scream. I don't mind! LoL
Date: 08/22/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Shit! Kevin! Brooke! OMG! Need more! Hurry! LOL
Author's Response: LoL I love ending on a high note!
Date: 08/22/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh my fucking god. i am in shock. what the hell. he better not kill or hurt her in any form. amazing job. cant wait for more
Author's Response: Good cliffy? haha
Date: 08/22/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
they were so close, I hope Nick kills him. He shouldn't live after what he's done. But Nick with a gun? Reminds of his Matrix vid from their show.
Author's Response: LoL I love the Matrix video...I will be seeing it AGAIN in FIVE DAYS!!! :)
Date: 08/22/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh I know something bad is going to happen there. I just hope it's not a death that will hurt BSB. As in Aaron can die and Jane defiantly can die. Hopefully not the others. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LoL I'm glad we have the category of people that CAN die and then the category that CAN'T die, haha :)
Date: 08/22/10 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh lord I knew Nick would snap like this. I would too if someone took my child. I know in the contents it says death but please tell me Nick doesn't die. Awesome update has me fiending for the next chapter.
Marguerite
