Date: 08/23/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
awww poor Kev :( im very sure it's hard for him to break the news to them and i think no matter how prepared he was for it, it was hard on him and everybody.
your nick is uber cute but AJ wins for this : “I can’t sleep on the bus when it’s not moving. It makes my stomach hurt.”
it makes my stomach hurt from the LOL.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm a big fan of your work :). I totally agree with you about Kevin breaking the news. And that's funny that you mention that line about AJ because no one else has. When I reread the story, that's the line that makes me laugh the most. Is it weird to laugh at your own stuff? This is only my second time writing...LOL.
Date: 08/18/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh he really does love them. You should write more of this.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! And of course he loves them :) He's big brother!
Date: 08/18/10 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was good. It was serious but it still had those 'smile' moments. Loved the 'entertain me' Chuck E. Cheese comment. hahaha
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And lol at the Chuck E. Cheese comment...it was a last minute thought so I'm glad it worked!
Date: 08/17/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this is deep Sel! Kinda got emo with how Kevin was thinking about how him leaving the group would affect the rest of them and how he felt like it would all be right with him leaving. Seriously makes you think if these were the thoughts that were running through his head. I totally laughed my ass off with AJ and Nick. Love how you kept in tune with Nick's pestering and how he was able to rouse his friends from their slumber and how he thought it was a good idea to do so. And of course, AJ being a drama queen and a spaz. I love how you do AJ, it's sooo him and it's freaking hilarious! LMAO. And of course, good ole Howard to point out the facts and point out how stupid AJ is, lmfao. I really liked this response Sel, great job hun! Seriously look forward to seeing more work from you! :)
Author's Response: Aw thanks Rebbers! I originally wanted to do a funny story but this idea with Kevin wouldn't leave my head. Of course AJ would be a drama queen. Lol. I had the hardest time wriing Kevin acually so that was a challenge! Hope to do more writing :)
Date: 08/17/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was a great story Sel! I loved it!! Espeically the entertain me thing lmao Nice angle! Thanks for writing the challenge and yay to you writing another story! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Mare! Means a lot. The entertain me thing was something random I added in during editing. lol. I'm having a lot of fun writing. Now if I can just come up with an idea for a story...
Date: 08/17/10 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed that. Poor Kevin though, what a hard thing to have to tell them.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I can imagine how hard it was. I always wonder what that conversation was like.
Date: 08/17/10 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this was kinda sad but I liked it. You're good at writing Sel! I'm proud of you. lol Doing challenges is a good way to start out I guess if you don't have any concrete ideas for a fic right now. :) I can't to read what you come up with next.
Author's Response: Aw thanks MA! Yeah, I wasn't too sure but I wanted to try something a little more serious. I figured it would be more challenging. And yeah, it was a little sad but had some funny mixed in :). I enjoy writing but don't have ideas for a story at the moment. So I figured I would just do some challenges to warm up!
Date: 08/17/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
and I STILL keep thinking how that convo was in real life... I think wasn't beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've definitely wondered what the conversation was like as well.
