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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm so reading backwards...I lost track of With The Band. And I've decided to start with the Coaster Girls...

Aw they seem like such a cute big family. wow you surprised me when you said that AJ wasn't her real father. I can see him as a daddy too. Great start...I'm hooked again!

Author's Response: Oh you are reading backwards...surprise! AJ isn't the real daddy but he's truly the ONLY dad she's ever known. I look forward to knowing your opinion when you get further along

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so sad it's over, but I understand what you said about leaving something to the imagination Jen! Outstanding ending!!! I love AJ's comment about Brenna's own ice cream bowl!!!!
Standing Ovation to you!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks April! I have a sweet little picture of little Brenna sharing ice cream with her grandpa and mom. :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

beautiful!!!! What a great chapter!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

50 chapters? really? Wow.......
okay...I'm ready for more!!!
Love that Shelby's a frosting stealer!!!! And only Ally would know how big her belly is, that's what sister's are for!!!

Author's Response: LoL well you could go on and on and on but I think leaving some things up to the imagination of the readers is okay too. You'll see Shelby and Mas in Brooke's story anyhow. :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mason in FL is just not a bad idea! :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm in a bit of a hurry but I didn't get the change to say which name I prefer. You should go with....JOLEE! Why? Elizabeth just don't fit with the Mcleans. I mean you're using names as Shelby, Molly, AJ....and so on. A Joleen aka Jojo would be perfect ;) But Brenna is also a nice name.

Author's Response: Jolee was trailing by quite a bit, but when you have a chance to read American Honey you'll see Brenna won. :) Elizabeth was quite traditional wasn't it? LoL. I have to admit I was partial to Jolee but I'm okay with Brenna. :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVE That you are letting us choose the name! you rock Jen!
Is it bad that I don't want Shelby to move to KY? I mean I want them to be together, but....oh I don't know! LOL Love that she's loving school. that's they way it should be.

My vote: Bren.....love it!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Shelby.......I couldn't imagine feeling so deflated!!!! Mason is going to make an amazing dad..
The thing that keeps going thru my head is "it's always different when it's your own"

Author's Response: you're not the only one that's thinking that april!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

my little bean had a great daddy

Seriously best line ever!!!!! Love it! Great story!!! Jen you are gifted!!!

Author's Response: LoL thanks april, glad you're lovin' it!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

post the third chapter of Love Story and the 1st of Amerian Honey. And post OIMD late late tonight.

I Vote for this!!!!

Author's Response: I already posted OIMD! I'll see how many 'new' stories get posted between now and late tonight. American Honey might still make an appearance!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh you are so evil. Now I will be haunting my email for an update.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

By the way...Thanksgiving Turkey, best kind out there! :) Just saying......I love Turkey!!!

Author's Response: I do love T-day turkey! :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh I can't wait for Brooke's story! I love Shelby's story! I was too a little taken back by Baby Landon! LOL Nice Surprise. I'm scared for Shelby...I couldn't imagine being so young, pregnant and having a guy like Mason already planning out the future....almost overwhelming!

Author's Response: Yeah I knew I wanted a fourth Carter and this seemed like the perfect way to introduce him! :) Yeah, it's not just almost overwhelming for Shelby...it IS overwhelming.

Reviewer: bjnkha9192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg I am LOVING this!! :D can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks! More will be coming...I'm going to try to keep up daily updates, at least 1 chapter a day. We'll see what happens. :)

Reviewer: MimiCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

AMAZING Chapter!!

Love your pics! You had to of been sitting a couple rows in front of me at the show judging by your pics. It was a great show!