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Reviewer: Basilia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

so cute!!! Good job on the first chapteer....

Author's Response: It's going to be a lot of fun!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

lol AJ has a crazy family. I love the twins though, they seem funny(little Shelbys?)

Author's Response: haha Tristan and Brayden are pretty much little Shelby's...yup :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Molls is a Saint!! Jesus.. heheh I agree with you, AJ looks AMAZING bald, but Bri..... poor Leighanne.
Yes, the twins are the worst!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

amazing start cant wait for more

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Jen, PLEASE email me about this post thing! Please! If here will get trouble you can post at that other site.
Love
Gabs.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG, I think you made real the future Mclean! Craziness all over the place, lots of kids and cursing moments... but, basically, LOVE all around!
Shel try to corrupt your father at his own game... NOT HAPPEN! EVER!
He gave her a nose ring! WOW!
Shel must be a lovely girl, just like her mom. Aww and Molls and AJ are still in love. awwww and he is bald... hahaha Bri too, isn't? hehehe
But I wouldn't mind to live with Mclean like that.
Ohh the kids... Jesus, Joe is just like his dad, I think the twins are worst, because they manage to mix the craziness of Molls side too... Lord... poor Ally!
Mason will be more than happy with Shel there... go Kentucky! (poor Kentucky and the Richardsons AND Ally for be alone there at home!)
NEXT!!!!
P.S.: thank God that Moll dye her hair.. with ALL those kids... just saying...

Author's Response: LoL Molly doesn't have gray here...amazingly. Something tells me she enjoys having all those kids around. AJ is bald but I think he looks GOOD bald. Brian on the other hand...haha. Only AJ would get his daughter a nose ring for her birthday :) Joe is so fun to write because it is kind of like a more innocent version of AJ. :) The twins are the worst, a mix of AJ AND Molly haha they are doomed.

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

looooooooooooooooooving it :))) can'r wait for more :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Man this is great so far! Loving it! :D

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok. You can pm me if you want. I think it really sucks though and is beyond stupid.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just a quick question. Who told you to slow down on the updates and why would anyone do that?

Author's Response: I'd love to answer the question but it's a long story and I want to keep my welcome on this site. It just means that readers will only get one chapter a day per each story and there's going to be a longer time before I can post the other stories.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh man Shelby grew up. And with AJ for a dad I'm sure she is a very strong young lady. And she met her soul mate at 5. Oh I remember when she met Mason. They were hell on wheels. She seems to have turned into a female version of AJ. Oh I can't wait to read more of her love/adventure. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
P,S, Just a quick weird question. Did/does Rochelles mom ever see the kids after her attempted lawsuit?

Author's Response: LoL actually it's funny I'm working on chapter 2 and Shelby remembers VERY clearly all the fun she had with little Mason. :) And, with all the grief Rochelle's mom put AJ through, I'm going to say the answer is a big NO. But, can you blame him really?

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Once a day? Ahhhhhh........I'm sure it's probably easier for you that way too....not so many stories going on at the same time! I do look forward to updates and new stories! You're a great story teller!

Author's Response: It's harder to go back and remember where the reader is since I will get so far ahead (which makes replying to comments harder), but I'm glad that you look forward to the updates and stories!

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this! its hard to image AJ with 5 kids but it fits because it equals a crazy House. joe is so AJ's son the poor girls. Cant wait for Shel to get to KY!

Reviewer: MimiCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am LOVING this so far! I was so excited to wake up to this update. :) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I've been told to lighten up on the updates so I'll be doing only one update on 'Love Story' and one update on 'Seven Days' each day. But, I'm glad that I made waking up fun! haha

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa! A house full of kids! Lol! I'm smiling at Joe cussing like his dad. I can see Joe being a lady killer when he's a lil older. Shelby, a 16 yr old with big boobs and a fat ass. I smell trouble! She's got body like her mom. She will be a man killer. Lol

Author's Response: Joe was really fun to write...an eleven year old smelly boy. What could be better? :)