Date: 08/20/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
(not that I studied it, or anything)... nah... not at ALL! Loved the parents convo, I was starting o think that. AJ never calling her.. it wasn't him!
Crazy Fam... love Molls!!! Natives, just her to handle that mess. Poor Ally!!!
Now the hot Mas.... you are trouble lill man! You are a mix of Nick and AJ.. that ISN'T GOOD!
Author's Response: Mason's a mix of Kev...Kev has a wild side...which would actually make an interesting story...but I already have too many stories in the works! :) I love Shelby's little ( ) comments, haha. Yeah, I think Molly told AJ not to hound Shelby EVERY day but don't worry he will pop up often. He can't STAY away!
Date: 08/20/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Another awesome chapter. Shelby's character seems so real and reading her throughts is great too, it feels like I'm inside her head. lol On to the next one...
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew going into this one that Shelby's was going to be very scattered and almost diary-like...
Date: 08/20/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
I knew Larry's folks wouldn't be there! Lmao! Mason is such a rebel - lol. A nice rebel though - hehe. I love him! Now, if only I were 10yrs younger - lmao!
I like how she tries to weasel A.J. into letting her drive-lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Shelby's got AJ wrapped around her finger...you just got to love it. Mason is a rebel but I wouldn't want him any other way than nice. He's a cute country boy, haha. Now to have him wear a cowboy hat...
Date: 08/20/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the twins, I really do. AJ and Kev are in trouble with these two though, sneaking out to unsupervised parties. *shakes head at Mason and Shelby*
Author's Response: AJ's twins? Yeah they're freakin' cute...male Shelby's, but two of them. LoL 'trouble' seems to be the word of the day!
Date: 08/20/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh Molly can sense the young love. I just hope AJ doesn't yet. Shelby is his baby girl. Daddys are very protective over them. I can see trouble ahead at this party with no parents there. I just hope those two end up ok. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Mom's know those kind of things...yeah it's probably best if AJ doesn't know yet...he's probably steal Lenni's pointy stick!
Date: 08/20/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter lol Mason is sneaky
Author's Response: Yeah, but it's a lovable sneaky!
Date: 08/20/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
they are so cute together. cant wait for more
Date: 08/20/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
love her struggle with "fine". Can't wait to see what is coming up!!!
Author's Response: lol yeah only Shelby could make the word 'fine' into a dramatic piece of work :)
Date: 08/20/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
Uh ohhh. I'm sensing two very sneaking teenagers are going to get into a little bit of trouble at this party... cant wait HAHA!
I love how fatherly AJ is to Shelby. Of course he's her father, but still... its clear he loves her like his own and thats so cute. I want a dad like that LOL.
Author's Response: Sneaking teenagers? WHOEVER do you mean? ::sarcasm:: LoL yeah it doesn't matter that she isn't his biological child...she's still one of his babies. :) That's what happens to bad boys that have daughters! haha
Date: 08/20/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love how sneaky Mason is...lol. And Kevin is so naive. And poor Shelby. I can totally see AJ being overprotective! Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Sneaky? Mason? Yeah, pretty much! I don't know that Kevin's naive...but I think he remembers being that age. Dads are usually more lax with sons than daughters...as we know from AJ being overprotective!
Date: 08/20/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love it!
I have a feeling something might happen during this party....;)
Author's Response: What ever might happen during an unsupervised party? LoL!
Date: 08/20/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
I smell trouble and I like trouble! Lol.
Author's Response: I like trouble too! LoL
