Date: 08/22/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ohhh YAY!!! That's the Richardson side I like the most! *grin* Oh poor Shelby, she isn't THAT crazy as many ppl could think off... her mom, on the other side, YES!
Poor Mclean, HE would have a heart attack knowing all these extra activities of his older one.....
Def Shel, let's make it interesting! *winks*
Oh Lord... Mas naked..... and the night got hotter than ever.... NEXT!
Author's Response: LoL it's the Richardson side I like the most too! AJ needs bayer if he has a heart attack...j/k!
Date: 08/22/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh! Two naked teenagers in a lake...alone. trouble is coming.
Author's Response: Trouble? Two naked teenagers? ::grin::
Date: 08/22/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG!! How is he Kevin's son?! They're skinny dipping!! o.O I love how she compared Mason to 'stupid naked little brothers'.
Author's Response: In the words of the immortal Britney Spears...Kevin ain't that innocent! LoL yeah stupid little brothers don't hold a candle...
Date: 08/22/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh my oh my hehe. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL I'm looking forward to writing this next chapter!
Date: 08/22/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh yes she is defiantly AJ's daughter. Yes Shelby my dear you are crossing an invisible boundary in life. It's called going farther. Just hope no one catches you. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yeah, AJ would NEVER turn down skinny dipping!
Date: 08/22/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
I bet you anything Kevin somehow manages to fidn them or someone else spots them ?& they get in a shit load of trouble! Roflmao!!!!!! Leave it to Mason to suggest skinny dipping!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL ::lips sealed::
Date: 08/22/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow, I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. lol You might wanna fix all that italics. lol Great job. :)
Author's Response: Fixed the italics...that's what I get when I post a chapter when I'm hung over lol. Thanks!
Date: 08/22/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Interesting..oh hunny, you are about to make life VERY interesting!!! lol Awww, they are gonna go skinny dipping! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh boy........
Author's Response: LoL just all innocent fun, right? ::grin::
Date: 08/22/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
This is too cute. And I love Mason! He's a sneaky little one :) Cant wait to read more about them and very interested to see how the dads will find out about them.
Author's Response: The sneaky ones are always cute :)
