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Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 13

They are so sweet together!!

Another great story!

Author's Response: I think they're pretty sweet together too :) Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter 13

I just love Shelbys mind, it sure isn't easy to be 16 :) And Mason takes after his dad, I remember Kevin talking about going skinny dipping in an old mtv interview ;)



Author's Response: I remember that interview! I think we all forget that Kev was a crazy teen...Nick and AJ just do crazy so much better...and so often that it's easy to skip over Kev's antics lol

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 13

Wow. But I'm really glad she came to her senses. They were going to fast. And she realized she was in love. This story is so sweet. Can't wait for more.

It is such a contrast going from Seven Days to this but I love it. Great work!

Author's Response: Yeah SD and LS are total opposites. I love working on them simultaneously. Glad you're enjoying! :)

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter 13

Holly wow!

Author's Response: LoL

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 03:07 am Title: Chapter 13

Awwwww. Sweet, yet I was still waiting for Kevin or Addy to show up with shot guns! Lmao!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Addy with a shotgun is so eerily normal in my mind, lmao!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13

Awwww, Mason is so sweet. He probably was reasdy but the second she stopped he did too. :) I wish all guys were like Mason.

Author's Response: Guys are ALWAYS ready...but I agree. I wish ALL boys were like Mason too :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

Daaaaamn that was hot! I'm glad they didn't go all the way though, but i have a feeling they won't be able to wait much longer.

And hahaha i can't wait for Kevin and AJ to find out. AJ will most like have steam coming out of every crevice and Kevin... well probably the same. AJ will probably kill Kevin haha

Although i do think Shelby is quite responsible and mature. She's got a good head on her shoulders.


And awww at her realising she's in love with Mason. Honey you've been in love with him since you were five don't deny it. HAHA



Author's Response: I think 'hot' and 'wow'' summed up this chapter's reviews, lol! Ah, the dads....we shall see :)

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wow that was HOT and Glad she stopped them and Mason ever the Gentlemen agreed very Nice. Love this Couple.

LMAO @ are there any snakes in this lake.haha More Please



Author's Response: I love teenage Mason...I loved five year old Mason too...hell I just love Mason :)

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13

Lmao! Shelby asked if there were any snakes in the lake! So funny. I wonder if they will fall asleep like dat...outside. update soon plz cuz I have to know! Lol

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

Great chap!! The part about he snake is hilarious! And I'm glad that things are going well for them but I'm also glad that she stopped them. They were moving too fast! Lol. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I agree they were moving too fast...damn teenage hormones!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Such an amazing job can't wait for more.

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 13

WOW!!!...just...WOW!!! THAT was HOT!!!  Good thing they decided to wait tho....

 

 

WOW!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: I love my Shelster lol

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wow. WOW. That was hot...and they're teenagers. But that was still hot. LMAO Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I know..teenagers shouldn't be hot, but....:)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

*thud* ALRIGHT! Lill Richardson def have the gees of the Fam! WOW!
"I was feeing a little self-conscious. And excited. I had a feeling this would be on my dad's list of things that Shelby was never supposed to do.But what daddy didn't know..." Thank God dad isn't aware!
"Oh god, I was a moaner." I know someone that is a moaner too.
"That's not a snake, Shel." I would laugh.. but I won't!
WOW!
Mason's such a gentleman! Kevin, you teach him nicely!
Awww they love each other!
Now they will have to face this further moment.... *sighs*

Author's Response: LoL I think everyone enjoyed that snake line! haha

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13

Now that is the beginning of real love. When you can stop and know it is ok. I can see these two being together for a very long time. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I COMPLETELY agree...very mature decision :)