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Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 14

Poor Ally! And AJ! That is such a scary thing the first time, I don't know what I would've done without my mom.

Author's Response: I know ... I wouldn't have wanted to handle that without mom. Molly picked a HORRIBLE day for a doctor's appt!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 14

Poor Ally, getting her period and only dad is around. AJ had to be freaking out. That would have been funny to see. Shelby is such a good sister.

Author's Response: Only dad...and Joe. The WORST combination IMAGINABLE! LoL it makes for a really funny mental image though!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ok I feel really awful and guilty and stupid because I just realised I barely ever review while you sooooo deserve it!!!!

So, first, as we're talking about periods.. mine was at 11 I think (but I'm 18 so..) But I was lucky, it happened in the shower but oh lord, i was freaking out too just like Ally (: (we're all girls here, so i shouldn't feel weird talking about this but still i do lol)

Anyway, I think Addy is being the first to find out sooner or later but I gotta feeling she won't mind. (: The phone scene was hilarious though, I can already hear AJ screaming and freaking out in my head lmfao!

I will promise to review more from now on! (I still feel awful even after this review)



Author's Response: Aw thank you for reviewing! I'm just glad that you're enjoying what you're reading! I had this mental image of AJ freaking out too...all tattooed up and flipping over his daughter starting, haha. Joe was my favorite thing to write--only a brother would make it a million times worse!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 14

LMAO at that phone convo!!!!! Great scene! Something tells me that Shelby and Mason won't be able to hide their relationship for long...can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: LOL everyone's banking on this relationship cover to be blown. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oooh I have a feeling Addy is on to Shelby and Mason. She definetly strikes me as someone who can spot something a mile off!

And with Shelby and Mason... i have a feeling it won't be long before they give in to each other, unless Addy gets between them, which i have a feeling she will.

Update sooon!!!



Author's Response: LoL yeah Addy's a smart cookie. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hehe too funny poor aj hehe can't wait for more

Author's Response: AJ got so totally lucky when he met Molly...otherwise the future of Ally and Joe would have scared me. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh lord Shelby had to play mom to her sister. Aj was so funny for all of the experience he has with woman this freaked him out. And I think Shelby was right. Addy knew what was going on. I hope if there is a next time that they both use protection. Neither of them is ready to be a parent. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

Well *sighs* let's say that Joe couldn't fight his genes.. plus his momma wasn't THAT angel too.. soooo...
Now thinking: when Molls back at home she will see ALL those activities... hahahah tho, she is used to it by now.

Author's Response: LoL no Ro had her devilish side...Joe's one big ball of all of that attitude!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yes.. chap 13 was HOT! Poor Ally... she is so young... why do you think I'm tiny?? Same age!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh Lord, Addie and Kevin are the perfect couple.. that is a way to wake up kids? hahahaah
And I feel she knows..... sneaky! A Fam thing..
Mas is immune to the cold water... poor Shel not so. Imagine yourself at her place? I don't know swim! I would thing I was drowning!
Anyways... awwww Ally Bug is a lady now. Poor thing! With those crazy brothers and a dad that is worst than her! Thank God for the phone and sister!
Seams that Shel is older than you Alex!!! ALL those girls in life and nothing? Jesus!
"Hey Shel, Ally's bleeding out of her va-jay-jay."
LORD! hahaha
"JOE GET OFF THE PHONE!" Dad screamed.
Now, knowing Alex's OMGezzle voice... LORD, THIS SCREAM! I would run and hide! And be deaf.
Oh poor Mclean... of you only knew.... one girl is a lady now... the other almost a woman..... you wouldn't be able to have Bayers fast enough! Just saying...

Author's Response: LoL poor AJ...if he had hair he would be losing it fast with all those kids! It's hilarious that Joe's just like him...big trouble ahead once HE hits the teenage years!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

hmm....gonna end up being a firecracker in bed like her momma. I can feel it.



Author's Response: ::whistles innocently::

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 14

Loved the last couple of updates.
Chapter 13 was hot! But I'm glad they waited because well would they use protection? haha we don't want Shelby ends up pregnant lol.

Poor Ally....She's 10? that's pretty young, or I was late at 14 hehe (Why am I telling this?) ;)

Author's Response: Ally's on the young end...it's like 10-14.. :) I think it's unanimous that everone thought ch. 13 was hot. Go me! LoL

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

ROFLMAO! Oh, poor Ally! I was 11 - a month shy of my 12th b-day. I still remember it to this day - we were bowling - lol.

A.J. God man! She's a girl, what'd you expect?

Lmao. Oh, Mason. They sure do have some ways to torture you into waking up. Jeez!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I can totally see Addy chasing AC with a shot-gun now in the other fic, to blow off HIS good for nothing balls!



Author's Response: LoL AJ doesn't take the whole 'growing up' thing well, can you tell? The worst part of the whole thing is Ally's stuck with nothing but males around. Every woman HAS to pity her. :) But, I think that it's total retribution giving AJ daughters, haha. Teaches him to be such a ladies man! As for your P.S. - yes I SO can see 'Addy' Oakley going after AC!

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 14

Tonight?!?! Why's ya gotta make me wait so long, huh? i'm dyin' here... :)
:::checks site for update:::

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

hahahaha! Ice water! Oh Hellz!
Ooooh... light his feet on fire! Wakey, wakey Mas! :)
OMG, poor Ally! To be stuck in a house fulla boys on *that* day :(
Awesome chap... waiting ever so patiently for more...
:::bats eye innocently as i'm repeatedly checking for updates:::

Author's Response: I would NOT want to be Ally either, lol. btw, I love the innocent batting of eyes...unfortunately there's going to be a wait for the next chappy...later tonight! :)