Date: 08/24/10 08:37 am Title: Chapter 15
Lol, Mason can't win from Shel. ;) (referring to the dinner scene)
'I was braless and now he wanted me to try on dental floss.' - that's probably the perfect description about how I think about those things LOL!
Shel came up with a quick and good excuse when Kevin noticed the Victoria's Secret bag. You go girl! (:
(See, I told you I would review more)
Author's Response: LoL I never doubted you! the dinner scene amused me just writing...girls have more leverage with footsie than guys do! And I agree, dental floss was THE perfect desription. :)
Date: 08/24/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 15
OH LORD! This was my fave chapter till now! This sneaky Richardson is good.... I can see his grin and attitude all over the place. What was that dinne??? WOW! Shel is a young Molls.. I can see more, WAY more moves coming.. poor Mclean.... he have NO idea... hahhahaha
Now my beloved Victoria's Secret... awww.... it was... HOT HOT HOT! WOW! No comments.... just.. HOT!
"There? Your dad lets you shop there?"
I smiled. "My dad's AJ McLean." She LOVED have to say that... hahahah...
Oh Dan.. you are PERFECT! Mas calculated every step that his dad and brother would do! Now THAT is HOW to be a Richardson!
These parents should be more aware of their kids... judge THEIR actions! The next generation is WAY more improved, guys! AJ + Molls taking care of Shel.... Kevin + Kristin + Addy+ Sneaky full of abilities Mas! Shel + Mas = HOT CRAZY RED MESS!
NEXT!
P.S.: The Mcleans will have SOOOOOOO MUCH to worry about... all those boys in action.. *shaking head* Well... those fathers will... oh.. you guys got my point!
NEXT˛!
Author's Response: It's funny but I can almost see Mason looking up a map of the mall on his computer and plotting strategically where to go buy clothes in order to get her to VS lol. So sneaky and I LOVES it!
Date: 08/24/10 03:54 am Title: Chapter 15
They are getting a little reckless but I love it!
Girl there is going to come a time when you regret looking older. Ha ha.
I freaking (heart) this story. I look forward to the emails saying it was updated. Keep them coming. :-p
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you look forward to the updates! And you are SO right about the 'old' compliment...it SO catches up with you!
Date: 08/24/10 03:09 am Title: Chapter 15
wow, i cant wait to see what kind of "crimes" get committed this summer with these two. i love this so much!
Author's Response: LoL oh their 'crimes' are so much fun :)
Date: 08/24/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 15
Roflmao!!!! I just KNEW Mason was going to come into the dressing room & that they'd get caught!!!!! Too freakin' funny!!!!!!! Mason is such a rebel! A fucking hot rebel! Can I be 10yrs younger? Please? Just for this? Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I will SO totally join you on the 10 years younger bandwagon! Mason is ranking right up there with Nick in terms of wild rollercoaster hormones! And the rebel-ness...oh yes the rebel-ness...
Date: 08/24/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 15
"My dad's AJ McLean." :) The girl has a point. I love all the little sexy moments between them but I'm pretty sure Kev knows something is up.
Author's Response: LoL i loved that line. Almost didn't put it in there. :)
Date: 08/24/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 15
Your dad maybe Aj Mclean but he doesn't allow you to shop there. He would freak out! Lol! Mason and Shelby are getting too careless. They will be caught soon. I hope they get to go all the way before that happens though.
Author's Response: Do you sense a catch scene coming up? HMMM... :)
Date: 08/24/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh Shelby you may be playing with fire. I can see having feelings for Mason but you live a few states apart. And going that far changes things. Excellent update. I like how you really capture teenage feelings.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Oh Shelby is DEF. playing with fire. The idea of living a few states apart is really appealing to me...but that comes later :)
Date: 08/24/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 15
"...just centimeters from my hoo-ha."
I actually cracked up when i read that haha!
loved this chapter. Mason is definitely a dare devil and does exactly what he wants. And LMAO at them getting caught. I had a feeling that might happen.
I was so sure by the begining of the chapter that Kev and Addy had them sussed... maybe not? Or maybe they have and they are testing them... hmmm. Next chapter please? HAHA
Author's Response: At least they just got caught my a salesclerk! :) Addy and Kevin aren't stupid but Mason's not dumb. Dan was a great decoy wasn't he? :)
Date: 08/24/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow. lol They got kicked out of Victoria's Secret. LMAO Great job.
Author's Response: LoL yeah it takes a lot of skankiness to get kicked out of VS!
Date: 08/24/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 15
oh my oh my hehe getting caught in the dressing room bad bad hehe. cant wait for more.
Date: 08/24/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 15
I love this line: "My dad is AJ Mclean." HAHA. Somehow I don't think Mr. Mclean would be too pleased with his daughter in that dress. The part where Mason spit coke out everywhere was hilarious. I'm dying to see how the parents are gonna react.
Author's Response: LoL well you look at AJ and it's REALLY hard to argue with that line! But I agree...AJ would NOT be pleased.
