Date: 08/25/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww great chapter and lol @ Dan catching them and getting money out of Mason to keep his secret,wonder how long that will last. Wonder also if Addy is suspicious at all.
Date: 08/25/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 16
Somehow I can picture Kevin blowing up a plane altough it's more of a Nick thing to do. I can't wait to see if they get caught 'doing it'. I have a feeling Kevin is going to find out quick.
Author's Response: LoL yeah it is a Nick thing to do :)
Date: 08/24/10 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ooooo they are so cute together. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks! to anyone waiting for the next chap I am without internet tonight. Im on my mobile. Will post at work tomorrow!
Date: 08/24/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Omg! What a great chapter. I love how dramatic Shelby is. My favorite part was when she was talking to herself in the mirror. Lol. And I wonder how long they'll be able to keep their secret with Mason knowing...
Author's Response: she's a drama queen...it's why I like writing her so much. I had to laugh at her whole mirror convo...that would be something I would do!
Date: 08/24/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH LORD! Here they go! What a nice present, young Mr Richardson... GO RED!
Author's Response: lol yeah that's not a cheap-ol birthday present right there. ::GRIN::
Date: 08/24/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOL at the plane exploding and Mason paying off Daniel to "forget" what he saw. Holy crap, they're gonna "do it"...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I loved the plane exploding...poor Kev...his toy got ruined, haha. I can't WAIT to get home tonight and write up the next chapter. Tons of ideas flying through my brain today!
Date: 08/24/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love the way you describe the way Shelby feels about this, I think that's the way every 16 year old think. Like it's gonna change your life, but then you wake up the next day and everything is still the same.. lol :)
And all the hickys, nothing is more ugly, yet more cool whe you're 16 :)
Author's Response: She is like THE classic 16-year old. I'm glad you think I write her well. :) I agree about the hickeys...TOTALLY ugly! LOL
Date: 08/24/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oye vey in a half shell. This part of it makes me think of my story 'Happy Birthday, Sweet 16' - lol.
Gotta love them young, teenage hormones. Though, when I was their age, I never even came close to this. Never even had a boyfriend. No one wanted me. Jerks.
Hope they don't get caught! Again....lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I was in the same boat as you Lenni. My now husband was one of those jerks, haha. :)
Date: 08/24/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh my godddddddddddd i cant wait to read the next part!!! is dan gunna blab? or ask for more hush money? this could become very costly. i secretly want kevin to find out, the phone call to AJ would probably be priceless. this is so great, keep up the great work and ... update soon!!
Author's Response: da da dunnnnnnnnnnnn :) I will keep my lips nice and sealed right now!
Date: 08/24/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmyyyyyyyy.......
I knew Daniel would find out...LOL at least he's good at keeping secrets for a fee! LOL
Author's Response: LoL the kids not dumb...good thing Mason got a job!
Date: 08/24/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOL at Dan busting them. Ah blackmail at its best.
Uh oh. Why do I have a feeling something bad is about to happen? If they do go for it they better use protection. Maybe they should be going to Wal-Mart. Ha Ha.
Great job can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: ::rotflmao:: I had a blonde moment and I was like--why should they go to Wal-mart? And then I backtracked...and now I'm sitting at work laughing.
Ah, good times. :)
Date: 08/24/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
I literally slapped my hand against my mouth when I read Dan busted them, as if Shel was sitting in front of me telling it and that would be my reaction lol!
Lines that made me laugh my ass off:
"I saw you sucking Shelby's face off!"
Dan began to inhale like a human vaccum cleaner. - I could just imagine him doing that!
I'm nearly bouncing on my chair for the next chapter!!! (I think everybody is)
And I just figured I haven't even finished reading Babies and the Band and Twelve Steps. :O No wonder I was surprised to read in this one that AJ and Molly were married AND had kids! Too bad there are other things I HAVE to do now. I don't even know what was the last chapter I read of those two stories. Oh lord...
I will review in those two too! (: (that will make up for all the chaps I didn't review hehe)
Author's Response: Ah, gotta love Dan catching them. I blame Mason. You don't go into your bro's treehouse. Rule #1!!! LoL yeah if you haven't finished BATB and 12 Steps you're going to be really surprised! There's another Carter floating around too! And a Dorough and---I'll just let you read :)
Date: 08/24/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh lord I hope they know what they are doing. And that they use protection. Awesome update. Keep them coming.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LoL two teenagers? Knowing what they're DOING? hahahahahahah
Date: 08/24/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
*mouth hangs open*
Date: 08/24/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Mason + Shelby = Trouble
Author's Response: I'd say that equation works out absolutely RIGHT. :)
