Date: 08/25/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh shit. They are both dead. I have a feeling Addy knew what they were up too and had them followed. However neither Kevin or AJ can say a damn thing since they both did the same thing when they were that age. Please update soon. I want to know if they live.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LoL if they didn't live this 'Love Story' would TOTALLY suck!!
Date: 08/25/10 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aww hell noooo!!! now thats a proper cliffhanger haha!
Poor Shel, she's gonna feel so embarrassed everytime she even see's AJ and Kev, cos now they have seen her naked.
And daaamn they were so close LOL. Hurry and post the next chappy Im dying to read what happens next haha!
Author's Response: I'm improving my cliffies as I go along, eh? :) So close...but no cigar, lol
Date: 08/25/10 10:59 am Title: Chapter 17
O MY GOD!!!
I was so in the story, thinking this is THE moment and all of a sudden the door opens and it's AJ and Kevin? omg...please let it be a dream (or a nightmare) or something haha.
Author's Response: Well...it's def. not a dream or nightmare! AJ and Kev are very real....so, poor Shelby is all I can say!
Date: 08/25/10 08:44 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh damn, this sucks, let them have a piece of a**.
Stupid dads!!!
Author's Response: LoL I don't think you're the only one thinking that!
Date: 08/25/10 06:58 am Title: Chapter 17
Ok its been awhile since i reviewed but i have been reading and im loving this story so much because shelby reminds me of myself at that age and All I have to say about this chapter is WOW! Mason better run fast cause A.J. might castrate him LMAO.
Great chapter lol
Author's Response: Mason is SO not AJ's favorite person right now! :) I don't think castration is out of the picture lol
Date: 08/25/10 05:54 am Title: Chapter 17
I had a feeling that if she had gotten a boy to play doctor with her on her sixth birthday that I was going to need a whole gun cabinet by the time she turned sixteen.
I was re-reading Twelve Steps and this line cracked me up because AJ didn't realize how true it was going to be. Mason you better run!
Date: 08/25/10 05:22 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh my gosh! I'm loving this story. It isn't my usual type but it's so good. Especially this chapter! Kudos!
Date: 08/25/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 17
I had to read it again.... Lord.... the worst moment EVER... what a timing Mclean and Richardson..... what a timing! I can see Addy sipping her tea and waiting those 'kids' at the coffee table..... and Molls at home....LORD! That scene will be burn into these eyes...
Date: 08/25/10 04:24 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow holly wow! Oh shit and wow! Oh my... Wow!
Date: 08/25/10 03:26 am Title: Chapter 17
HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!! How did they know!?!?!?!?! Was Kevin trailing them or something?!!?!?
They are SO fucking dead! They're going to be forbidden to see each other & grounded for life & EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!
I bet A.J. makes Shelby go home with him!!!!!! O-M-G!!!!!
And HOW fucking embarrassing is that!?!?! A.J. & Kevin have seen them BOTH naked!!!!! Not too bad for Mason, but Shelby!?!? I'd be fucking MORTIFIED!!!!!!!!!!
My heart goes out to the kids. I wish them all the luck in the world!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Why can I picture Kevin dragging Mason out to the woodshed to beat his ass for this? Lol.
Date: 08/25/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 17
oh my I did not expected that ending... LOL. I could picture AJ (as the girls dad) going crazy. I cannot wait for more. I love your stories. They are really great. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Haha...SURPRISE! (on the ending!) So glad you're enjoying this story...I'm feeling my writer's muse working overtime lately!
Date: 08/25/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter 17
O. M. G. This is gunna be intense!
Author's Response: LoL it's going to be awkward at the very least!
Date: 08/25/10 02:29 am Title: Chapter 17
oh gosh NO! i was really hoping that wasnt going to happen! did they know or something and thats why Aj came to town?! ahh want more!
Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter! :)
Date: 08/25/10 02:08 am Title: Chapter 17
OH NO FUCKING WAY!!!! I KNEW AJ WOULD GO THERE.... THAT'S WHY KEV WENT OUT.... LORD! POOR SHEL!! DRAMA!!
Author's Response: LoL you're right, that's why Kev went on. Major Drama ahead!
Date: 08/25/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG! How embarassing! Poor Shelby is naked in front of three guys. Two of them are old mean in her eyes. Wtf is Aj doing there?! Ughhhhhh! You can't leave it like that! I have to know what happens next tonight! Please! "Ill love you long time" lol
Author's Response: LoL you're not going to love me long time...I still have to WRITE the next chappy. :) But I agree about the embarrasment...three guys and ones her dad and all her goods are hanging out ::snort::
