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Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Wow. This totally sucks. lol I feel so bad for Shelby and Mason. On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 18

Poor mas and shel. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: LoL I know I EVEN feel sorry for them and I hold their little fictional lives in my hands :)

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 18

Oww Poor Shelby and Mason.....

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 18

I realize that finding out your 16 yr old is sexually active is traumatizing, but reactions (on both sides) was over top! AJ really stuck his foot in his mouth trying the "do as I say, not as I did" thingy. And Kevin, Kevin, Kevin...you have a 16 yr old hottie son. What do you think he's doing? Playing checkers & making purity speeches? Both dads gotta get their heads outta their collective butts. Speaking from experience, no grounding or embarrassing punishments in the world are gonna stop those two from getting together again. *wink wink.*
It always cracks me up when everyone jumps on the boy for "taking advantage" of a girl. Who are they kidding. They obviously aren't taking Shelby's personality into consideration! She's not exactly an innocent lil' angel. LMAO

Author's Response: If the scene at the kitchen table doesn't prove Shelby's lack of innocence I don't know what will. Plus it was HER idea! LoL Totally agree with everything you said here :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 18

Ok, Mason and Shel need to get to a college together and fast lol. I think AJ is over reacing , who better to go out with our daughter then you best friends son? I really hope they work it out and they deserve to be together.

Author's Response: One would THINK that would be a perfect arrangement! :) They do deserve to be together...too bad drama's getting everything, well...dramatic :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 18

Okay, they should've AT LEAST given the kids a chance to talk before they all fucking jumped down their throats! They're SIXTEEN, not fucking five!!!!!!!!! They are old enough to consent to sex, whether the adults like it or not. Least, in Canada they are. Jeez. Punishing them is just going to make them hate y'all & wanna be together even more. Yes, technically it was a horrible thing for them to be about to do, but there's no need to go off the deep end so bad. Chillax & see things through their eyes, not yours. Jeez!

*stands guard of Mason with my pointy sticks* BACK off A.J.!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I TOLD you that you could bring your pointy sticks with you!!! :) And yes, they are treating them like they're freakin' five years old. That's the most annoying part of the whole thing. LoL And that's what's going to make the rest of the story OH so much more interesting :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

Oh lord I can see being mad but Kevin is right both of them did far worse when they were that age. AND Mason writing an article is embarrassing but thats the price you pay. ANd No phone ot internet for a month won't work she will find a way to talk to him. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: LoL everyone's on Kevin's side...(and validly so!)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

Okay, seriously Kevin and AJ, total case of do as I say not as I did.....I can't even imagine what AJ had done by their ages! LOL

Have to say as outspoken as Shelby is, I was a little surprised she didn't try to pled her and Mason's case....not that it would have done a lot of good, but just my thought!

I don't want Shelby to go home! Poor Shelby and Mason!!!

Author's Response: The embarassment finally overtrumped her mouth, lol. And I agree...total case of do as I say...especially w/AJ!

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Poor Shelby and Mason! The parents are forgetting about how they were at that age. They did worse. At least Shellby and Mason love each other and knew each other since they were 5. Hopefully they get to talk to each other alone.

Author's Response: Oh, AJ did MUCH MUCH worse. We'll just have to wait and see what happens!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 18

No!!! Jeeze AJ don't you remember humping the stage?! In front of millions? Poor Mason and Shelby.

Author's Response: LoL too bad Nick wasn't there ...he would have just started piling UP the stories. :) AJ's like the WORST role model, I tell ya...

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 18

Omg! I love it. How inceredibly awkward when they're with all the parents...lol. And I love how you're writing AJ and how he's blaming Mason. And I love how Kevin is taking up for him when he mentions that Shelby probably seduced him. LOL! And kevin's definitely right. We know that AJ's had his fair share of "fun." can't wait to see the fallout.

Author's Response: Ugh that WOULD be awkward all sitting around a table like that. And of course AJ and Kev are blaming the OTHER kid. It's the dad claws coming out. :)

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 18

I wanna hit aj! And kevin! They are both jerks! Why can't parents be calm and understanding about something so important to a kid. I blame the parents. Had they talked to their kids about sex this may not have happened! Screw team Jacob I'm on team mason and shelby!

Author's Response: LoL @ Team Mason and Shelby. :) Don't hit the two old BSB-ers. They're still probably really pretty to look at!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 18

Although AJ has right in taking Shelby back and her parents grounding her don't they know that she is going to rebel against them? Can't wait for all the teenage drama coming our way.

I'm also glad Kevin called AJ on what a hypocrite he's being. There is nothing worse than your parents calling you out on your shit when they did the same exact bullshit if not even worse. It's not like she is sleeping around with someone she just met. She's known Mason practically her entire life. Poor girl. Will Smith had it right, "Parents just don't understand." LOL

Author's Response: LoL yeah the more I typed I could just picture Kevin getting more and more pissed...he HAD to call AJ out. AJ's just being bullheaded. And this wouldn't be a dramatic teen story if there wasn't rebeling. :) Will Smith ROCKS!