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Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 19

This was a good chapter and i hope shelby gets her kiss.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 19

You're so good....look at how riled you can get one group with the twitch of your finders! Love it!
I really hope that Mason get's that Birthday Kiss....life can't be that cruel can it?

Author's Response: Haha I love that everyones SO Team Mason and Shelby. It rocks. And as for life being that cruel....could it? Hmm... :)

Reviewer: luifis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 19

I think that Ally is going to help shelby to see mason in the party :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 19

OK now AJ is pissing me off. Seriously. What an asshole. I wish one the parents would at least understand where she is coming from but its like all of them are against them. It's us against the world for them. Well at least she has an ally (o.O) in Ally.

Author's Response: An ally in Ally...loves it!

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 19

o.o I can't believe this O.O AJ acts like this lol I sooooo can't believe this. For Kev it's okay but AJ ... I mean it's AJ you know what I mean AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJ lol....
uhhhh if AJ reacts like this what will nick do if something similar happens to Brooke in her story o.O ohhhh what a fun.

I looooved it amazing job but the parents shouldn't act this that long. The kiddos in love and they should both remember how they were at their age ;) and at least they thougth of using a condom :D

please update :D loooove you story

Author's Response: So glad you're loving it! You'll actually get to see Nick later on in this story. :) I have a plan!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 19

Just a question for Kev and AJ, didn't they foresee this when Mason showed Shel his weiner at age 5?! lol dads...

Author's Response: LoL they should have! If Mason wanted to play doctor at age 5 then fast forward 11 years and use your brains guys!

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 19

Uh oh....If AJ insists on being such a smartass Dad (i.e. the ugly pink dress) he'll deserve whatever comes his way via Shelby! I don't understand why Molly is going along with all this. She needs to grow a pair & put the kabash to AJ's stupidity. All they have to do is have Shelby & Mason be in charge of an infant for a day (hell, only a couple hours would do it). :o) Or, talk to a real pair of teenage parents. That would scare them. LMAO

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 19

brothers can be annoy so happy that I got two sisters. The more the adults tell them no the more the kids will want to do it. R the other three boys coming in this story. Just I thought I wonder if Shelby still calls Nick bob lol anyway if both of them want to do it they will find away.

about going bk to the shop it could be worse the person that kicked them out could of bean still there.

Author's Response: I was going to have that saleslady wait on Shelby but I thought her life sucked enough by now so no need to give the parents MORE fuel. :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 19

The parents need to get over it. I mean nothing really happend. And if they keep acting like they do now (Kevin/AJ) Shelby and Mason will find a way to sneak away.

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 19

Aww i really feel for Shelby at the moment. Aj is definitely over reacting...hell so is Kevin. She's 16 and more than old enough to have a boyfriend. Keeping her and Mason apart is only going to make them want to rebel more.

And I'm actually surprised Shelby hasn't rebelled actually. Maybe she is maturer than the adults give her credit for.

Oooor maybe you have something up your sleeve? HAHA

Author's Response: Me? Have something up my sleeve? ::grin:: I plead the fifth.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 19

Aw, this is so unfair. Shelby's 16, not 5. She shouldn't have to wear that. I'm 19-going-on-20 and my parents still think I'm 12 sometimes. But they're (AJ and Molly) just being parents and I'm sure it's hard to accept that your kid is ready to be sexually active and is curious and whatnot. I wonder how long this "Mason patrol" and stuff is going to go on? Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: It is unfair...but it's so fun to write unfair! My mom thought I was a kid even when I was 23. It was hell when I told her I was moving out. Got to love 'Mason patrol!'

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 19

OMG! Jesus... and I really can see AJ having those things. I think that he will be worst than that in real life, he KNOWS ALL the moves by far.... and those eyes with Kevin... WOW... the air could be cut! And Alex, you were low at some points.. just saying.
Well they are young, everything is so good and wild.
The ENTIRE Mclean set is there? WOW! Molls was right to do that with Shel.
And the brothers.... wow! Well, Al is a lovely sis!
Poor MAson... he will suffer more... Wow... NEXT!!!!
hahaha and the dress! haahaha OH ALEX! hahaha And the REAL bad thing: have to handle these brothers!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 19

I was hoping for a big "You aren't my father" type explosion but shelby looks like on the brink of just ignoring everyone and runing away. Why can't AJ see that Mason is better than some strange boy he doesn't know.

Author's Response: LoL yeah she's just ignoring...she's her own little thunder cloud right now.

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 19

Aj is so mean. Trying to get Shelby to wear that ugly dress. Lol! I hope she gets to talk to Mason.

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 19

Noooooooooo! I knew they would get interrupted! But also by AJ? I understand Shel's POV, I don't like AJ atm either (maybe 'cause I'm just 2 years older than her ;) Man, bummer! I feel so sorry for both Shel and Mason. :( I really like Ally, she's cute. (: Awh I can't wait for the next chapter! (Now I'll go continue reading BATB)

Author's Response: LoL enjoy BATB! Yeah, the dads HAD to interrupt...so totally sucks. We'll see where THAT goes. :)