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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

I loved this chapter. I really liked the part about Ally and her hearing devices.. I sometimes forget that she was born deaf so that was a great reminder. And I love how annoying Joe is. Lol

And LMFAO at AJ being an ass quack. And I forgot to mention another favorite part from the last chap. Addy making Mason do the newspaper article is just hilarious!

Author's Response: Yeah I think it's important because even I don't write a lot about Ally's hearing devices. Just a little reminder for those that are reading. :) I added the whole ass quack thing at the last minute but it sounds SO Shelby to me. :) Mason's going to get a lot of crap for that article...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 19

I think aj is taking it a little too far. He's just going to make them want to do it more. Amazing job can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Of course AJ's taking it a little too far...he takes EVERYTHING too far...and not always in a good way. :(

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 19

Ugh what an awful experience, aj should be a little more sympathetic at least to his daughters memories. When they finally do the deed, it will be epic. Great work. I love the quick updates!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoy the updates! Not sure if another one's coming tonight but we'll see :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 19

Something tells me Shelby and Mason are going to rebel and be together no matter what. And AJ better lay off or he will lose his daughter. He has no room to talk neither does Molly. He has slept with half of the known world and she slept with her boss. So they should back off. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Ah, I couldn't help but laugh because AJ probably HAS slept with half of the known world! Time will tell... :)

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 19

Now I wanna hit AJ and Molly! They cant honestly think that a girl her age just knows on her own that sex at her age is wrong! My god this is more their fault then hers! i just wanna scream "i hate you." for Shelby lol!

Author's Response: Shelby would probably appreciate that right now! LoL

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 19

The adults are being jackasses! They're even starting to piss ME off & that is NEVER a good thing!!!!

*sharpens my pointy sticks some more* I think I'm going to need an extra two of these, since 4 of you deserve to have them rammed up your asses.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Uh oh...the TMNT might have to come and have a talk with all the parentals! LoL