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Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

YEAH! GO SHELBY AND MASON, CONSEQUENCES BE DAMNED! LMAO On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh boy! What a night.... Oh Krys is the updated mom! Mmmm.... she will help some.... and YES, she is regret of her actions. And I think Addy and Krys relationship isn't the best... just saying..
And Alex "I spotted my dad in the crowd. He snorted and I saw his lips move. Mom jabbed him in the side." OH BOY! hahahahah I could see that!
Will read the next!! BRB!

Author's Response: Yeah I can see Kristin regretting the whole divorce and I can imagine Addy and Kris aren't each other's biggest fans. :) I SO can see AJ snorting at that exact moment. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

So amazing

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 20

Aww loved that they got a chance together! And love that Kristin understands. I think Shelby and Mason are going to use that to their advantage at some point.
Does he still live with her for certain times of the year?

And wanna hear something funny? LOL i finished work and saw i had an email from AC bout your update, and i actually walked home in the rain, under my umbrella reading your update. haha am i hooked or what!

Author's Response: Per the custody agreement Kev was supposed to have Mason during the school year and Kristin was supposed to have Mason during the summer. Because of his job, he stayed for the summer too...BUT he made a bargain that he would spend Fall Recess in October, Christmas break and Spring Break with her to make up for it. :) As for the second part of your review -- That is so awesome! Just make sure to look both ways when crossing the street, haha!

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

You go girl! Make it happen Shelby!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 20

Every time i see vanna saying "A Shelby" I swear, I feel like Shelby should say "look A Skank!" lol. But i love how Kristin understands totaly awesome. I just hope when they get back home AJ doesn't go overboard or he is going to push Shelby away.

Author's Response: LoL I know right? I hate Vanna...she's one of those teen girls you just love to hate. :)

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

LOLs Who would have thought Kristen would be the most level headed of all the parents. If Kevin doesn't watch it, Mason will start thinking about living with his mom..and then you just know Shelby will find a way to make it out to Cali. AJ: Brighten up, dude. Locking your kid away only makes them work on escaping that much more!

Author's Response: Interesting theory :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

Aw, I'm glad that they at least had the chance to be with each other at the party. And way to go Kristin. I can't believe I said that after the way she treated Kevin but she's forgiven. LOL

AJ and Molly are to blame for the way Shelby is acting. Rather than sit and talk with her explain about safe sex and all that jazz they lock her up. If they don't lighten up they're going to lose her, especially AJ.

Author's Response: It's the Shelby tornado...and AJ's only acerbating it! So...totally agree with what you're saying. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

At least she got to enjoy a little freedom. And Kristen being on their side isn't surprising. She always was the more laid back one. I wonder if there will be a Kevin Kristen reunion. Now that would make an awesome story. As for Shelby and Mason I have no doubt that their parents will not be able to stop them. Please update soon. Awesome story.
Marguerite

Author's Response: A Kevin/Kristin reunion would be interesting but I SO can't do that to Addy. But I had to give her some 'awesome' points at the party. :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 20

Go Kristin! Lol, finally someone who understands.

Author's Response: LoL yup, but like Shelby said...too bad she's the Cali parent!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 20

Little rebel McLean! I love it! Screw you AJ! Go team shelby!

Author's Response: Everyone KNEW she wasn't going to stay 'good' forever, right? LoL

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 20

They are so cute together!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, they are super duper cute :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad AT LEAST Kristin understands them! I mean, Yeesh! Kevin & A.J. are being such assholes about everything! Addy & Molly too. Jeez.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I now have four pointy sticks - Thanks TMNT for donating two! Lol.

Author's Response: Uh oh...your arsenal is growing! Yeah if the dad's weren't bad enough the mom's (er stepmom in Addy's case) are a big letdown too! :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh, I think I know what he's been wishing for too. (:
And Kristin! At least ONE parent who understands them!
When I read this chapter, I kept thinking about MTV's My Sweet 16 (I hate the girls in that programme lol).

Anyway, I really hope Shel can make his wish come true! *crosses fingers*

Author's Response: Yeah, I decided Kristin was going to be the cool parent since I had made her so 'witchy' in Nowhere to Go, lol. She deserved a 'web redemption.' I thought about My Super Sweet 16 too...Mason's party def. wasn't THAT bad but well, I know I didn't get to go clubbing on MY 16th!