Date: 08/27/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh now it would have been deadly if she had knocked on her or his parents window. But at least they were finally together and used protection. Now to get around their parents which I know they will. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/27/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 21
Aw, "Because I couldn't lvoe you any more if I tried." That's it, I'm cloning this Mason and taking him home with me, he's only two years younger anyway.
Author's Response: I could age him eight years and then I would take him home, lol
Date: 08/26/10 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
YAY!!! FINALLY THEY DID THE DEED!!!!!!
Okay, kinda bad to be cheering for 16yr-olds, but c'mon!!!! It's about damned time they got to do it! I just think it's funny that they ended up doing it on the roof of the house, right above the very people who're trying to keep them separated - lmao!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I know right? I thought doing it on the roof under all those bitchy people was sweet sweet redemption. :)
Date: 08/26/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 21
YAY!! They finally did it! love this chapter, was so perfect for them even if it was on a roof. Although i do wonder if anyone heard them, i mean i can hear the birds walking around on my roof... so I'm sure there was some kind of movement heard... right? HAHA
Author's Response: LoL we just got a new roof and I can't hear ANYTHING anymore. So I'm thinking the new roof masked most of the sound. :) but we'll see...
Date: 08/26/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 21
*squeals* THAT WAS SO SWEET! I didn't expect this at all! I wonder if this was Mason's wish. ;)
She will probably be exhausted in the morning though lol!
Cuuuuute chapter. (:
Author's Response: Oh you can bet that was Mason's wish. :) I don't know about the whole roof part but...yeah. :)
Date: 08/26/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 21
Finally!!!
I feel bad for Shelby (and Mason) that she has to leave...
Author's Response: Me too :(
Date: 08/26/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 21
YES! SCORE! TOUCHDOWN! GOOOOOOOOOAL! HOME RUN! SLAM DUNK! :D :D Now...let's hope they don't get caught getting off of the roof...wait. THEY HAD SEX ON THE ROOF OF HIS HOUSE?!?!?!? Wow.
Author's Response: LoL you've got to remember those two are crazy impulsive kids. Somehow that works for them. :)
Date: 08/26/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
Finally! Oh Mclean.. you can't hold on Shel... you know Molls.. your WIFE? Yep....
"Great minds think alike," he said softly. I nodded.
"Truthfully, his thoughts hadn't been far from mine since we were little." YEP... weird! heheh
And now... Lord... he haves a sneaky thing under his cowboy hat.. isn't?
NEXT!!!!!
Date: 08/26/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
I am sooo loving you right now! You are putting out chapters so quickly! They finally did it! I don't want them to be apart now. :(
Author's Response: LoL I've had this update since last night so I've been itching to post this chapter!
Date: 08/26/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh. My. God. Beautiful. Perfect. LOVE. Great job. I have no other words. LOL
Author's Response: I thought it was pretty good. Alone, romantic and, well...perfect!
Date: 08/26/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
Hehe they finally got to do it. Amazing job. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/26/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 21
AWWWWW, i wish my hubby and i could try that lol, but we live in the first floor of a condo so that aint happening. But i do hope Shelby and Mason can be toget without their parents freaking out.
Author's Response: LoL Yeah I don't think that would work out. As for me, I'm afraid of heights, haha.
Date: 08/26/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 21
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) how romantic :) loves it :D
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/26/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aw! This was a really sweet chapter. I'm glad they held out for something nicer than a truck lol. Even if it is a roof. I hope they can sneak back and not get caught. I love how you describe them wanting to be welded together...such a deep connection. They are adorable :) And I can't wait to see how thistle work out with her having to leave.
Author's Response: Yeah the truck seemed very...po-dunk, I guess. :) Yeah, leaving's NOT going to be pretty!
Date: 08/26/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
Now that's MUCH better than on a seat of a truck. :o) This is gonna make them work even harder to be together again. AJ won't know what hit him!
Author's Response: I do absolutely agree. :) I couldn't let her leave without...well, y'know. It makes for an interesting dynamic now!
